why you took so long

dafuq did I just read?

It's going along perfectly almost; there are a few historical innacuracies and a few typos but the story is very well written, keep up with the good work.

Definitely a different style then that of MLP, even the darker stuff. Though it is still quite interesting and good. I am curious to know where you would go from here

Please continue.

I draw two contusions from this. First is you seemed to have replaced black k people with ponies in the civil war. And Goerge Washington rode Luna. Lol. I'm like WTF?