Reviews for Harry Potter and the Scīenra Cwēna |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wondering if you plan in ever coming back to the story? I recently found it and now I'm invested! Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() now we get to the absolute WORST part of any story, the "will they wont they" angst. hopefully if doesnt last very long, its always obnoxious to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see that it has been more than 10 years since you have updated this story. Is there any chance that you will come back to finish this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see that it has been more than 10 years since the last update. Is there any chase that you'll come back and finish this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. Can hardly wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Nice escape drama! Tight well written scene. I loved the creative plot twist and hereby Hermione mixes muggle tech & Science with of Magical Spell Construct. Using the living Soul Mate Bond as Windows on the Soul is very clever. It works because Harry is the linchpin between the two Worlds. All three Potters are exceptional. All three are magically powerful. All three have been ostracized and looked down upon. All three are lonely. FLEUR is far more than just a part-Veela — an exotically beautiful creature (woman/bird hybrid) who gives off a sexual allure that can scramble the sense of males and some female magicals (Muggles, too?) At here are few Veela if any in Magical Britain because the Wizengamot has made such horrifically oppressive and repugnant creature laws. Regardless of Britain, Fleur Potter née Delacoeur has studied Magic extensively. Fleur is a very tactile woman and because of her Veela ancestry she is not inhibited or sexually repressed. (Yes, Fleur is physically a virgin — info given during her interior monologue). Note: Veela mature on a different time frame than regular magicals. Fleur is 2 years older than Hermione and 3 years older than Harry. Hermione Potter née Granger has an irrepressible need to know. Her curiosity, discipline and immense intellect often scared off her muggle peers — and later her magical peers. even though no one can deny her. Brilliance, Hermione has been bullied, belittled and abused often used poorly. She craves love and affection. Hermione has long based her confidence and self-image on her scholastic performance, which hinges on the praise and regard from adult authority figures. She has little respect for the majority of her peers. Harry is a curious enigma. He is probably one of the most famous magicals alive yet shuns the spotlight. He is from wealthy and ancient Magical family yet wears rags and has few possessions. Harry grew up in the muggle world like Hermione did yet he has always seemed oddly ignorant of muggle culture, technology & advancements. However, when push comes to shove, Harry James Potter is a magical power house. He keeps on demonstrating special talents: As a mere toddler of 15 months, Harry Potter not only survived a direct Killing Curse spell from The Dark Lord, he somehow reflected it back on the Caster destroying his body. Harry survived years of starvation & deprivation that would have surely crippled or killed most young magicals. Harry can fly like a bird using a magical broom with no prior training Harry has preternaturally fast reflexes & hand-eye coordination. Harry has heightened senses -eye sight. Note: Harry wears old muggle spectacles which are not even calibrated to the prescription his eyes require, yet he can spot a golden snitch in a huge Stadium before anyone else. How? Harry has a usually strong bond with his Owl familiar . Harry is a Parcel-mouth (rare born magical trait). Harry heals very quickly even for a magical. Harry survived being bitten by an insane Basilisk that was over a thousand years old - when he was deemed worthy by a rare sentient magical Phoenix who (1) helped incapacitate the XXXXX beast by blinding it; (2) cried healing tears on Harry’s wound made by a Venom-infused snake fang; and (3) chose to magically extricate him and 3 others from a perilous location. Harry was able to produce a corporeal PATRONUS at the age of 13 which was so powerful that it drove off almost a hundred dementors. Harry was chosen by the Goblet of Fire. Harry can shake off the Imperious curse at 14. Harry is barely affected at all by Veela Allure and can just ignore the magical confundus-like affect that stops most magical males in their tracks. Harry formed a soul bond with two powerful witches. Harry keeps defying expectations because he doesn’t know what most magicals are raised believing to be impossible. With Hermione and Fleur increasing his confidence and creating magical spells just for him, Harry Potter will be incomparable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. It's a shame that you just abandoned it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sad that you have been unable to contine this story. I really like it. I hope all is well |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I were at Hogwarts to observe all the witches and wizards I would be tearing into them about what I have observed about them for their to lack of logic and common sense and their inability to tell the difference between truth and lies. And how their community has done nothing but abuse One Harry James Potter. And Abus is the worst of the lot by placing Harry with his abusive relatives who have been mentally and emotionally and physically abusive with Ddkt being the worst. Plus I would make of that Harry is not a tool or a weapon and he is not to be a human sacrifice for a Community that has proven over and over again that it is not worth saving as it currently stands. If they are to survive they have to change and get back in touch with the one being who is the one who granted them the ability to perform magic as and it isn't who they think and believe. All of the page gods' pantheons are not what they think and believe most are not real and never existed while others are something completely different fallen angels and their disembodied Nephilim brats now known as demons. So to put things here I a here to tell you a decision has been made you no longer have to manage your own affairs which means governing and policing and many will have their magic bound or stipped. And my any have committed crimes/Sins so great they are to be put to death as required by law as set by GOD'S The To father. In fact, abus you condone and bless abuse of children. Albus do you know how many of the children you returned to their abusers have died no thanks to you and their begging and crying for help but you didn't listen and as a result, they never returned back to The Hogwarts for their schooling they not even sent to another school of magic or had tutors hired to continue their education heck they never even made it o a mundane school. They are dead no thanks to you. and you are one of many wizards that is to be put to death. in fact, you are even guilty of interfering with workers whose jobs are to protect children which means removing them from their abusers. And then removing the memories of said workers thus why you are a criminal who has been sentenced to death. All death eaters are to be put to death. Riddle's Horcruxes are be being hunted down as we speak and arrangements have been made to remove the one in Harry's scar without killing him as you had planned. And to point out how serious I am on this issue all of you have been spanked and and whipped withof the students of Hogwarts minus Harry and a few others who know and believe Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just found this story thanks to a story theif. please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lost me with the soul binding stuff. Not for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont see the appeal of browbeaten harry who walks the martyr route. its like he is barely the MC, just following others. the way you did away with ron was very heavy handed, the same for fleurs introduction |
![]() ![]() ![]() It always make me angry Ron's behavior in book 4. Harry almost died to save his sister and he never mentioned or ask anything about it because that is what a true friend should do. But in the case of Ron it seems that materials things like gold or fame are far more important. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you don't find such good grammar and writing style in a fic so often. Good job, you are a great author. |