Reviews for Hide and Seek
LouiseKurylo chapter 15 . 8/6/2014
"Men would pay thousands to have looks like mine and women would pay even more for their men to have looks like mine!" Gotta love a line like that. Perfect Jane. Oh, yeah. It's a terrific story, too. I very much like Jane's last minute action which saves himself and his family. Thanks for writing it.

P.S. Writing little children is difficult as the result is often cloying. Good job in avoiding that.
Jane Doe51 chapter 15 . 6/22/2014
Jane with Lisbon...the best place he can be.
Love the line about the scars...very moving ! That's really something I love in every one of your story : the way Lisbon talks to Jane...how she makes him see things differently, under a positive light.
Jane Doe51 chapter 14 . 6/22/2014
Aww...they did find him and RJ's dead...good riddance !
Jane is finally back with his family...finally !
Jane Doe51 chapter 13 . 6/22/2014
It was about time they got a clue ! I was really scared Lisbon would listen to Cho and give up on Jane...So I guess closing Anthea's eyes wasn't (only) a gesture of kindness but Jane's way to give a clue to Lisbon and the team. Well done...they still have to narrow down the location but it's something to work on ! It's a very needed start !
Let's hope RJ's payback won't be too hard on jane...
Jane Doe51 chapter 12 . 6/22/2014
Leave it to RJ (and you) to come up with creative ways of torturing Jane...having to witness RJ kill the baker...and threatening to go after his family if he ever gets bored of Jane...That's awful (well done !) !
Jane Doe51 chapter 11 . 6/22/2014
This is so, so sad...Three months...Mallory's birthday...this is a very bittersweet occasion...but the cake thing might be RJ's downfall...
Jane Doe51 chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
Well...RJ did plan on them finding out who he is and made sure they wouldn't find them...
One month...poor Jane and poor Lisbon...
And then an email...from who ? and why ? what's the point ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 9 . 6/22/2014
The team rescued Lisbon and Mallory...guess RJ planned on it. But he surely didn't plan on them Iding him and finding where he is. Let's hope Lisbon's gut was right...I love it when she does something so Jane-like.
Jane Doe51 chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
So, this is Red John after all.
Only him would come up with the idea of having Jane chosing to follow him to spare his family and having Lisbon witnessing this 'choice'.
Will he really release Lisbon and Mallory ? How will Lisbon find Jane ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 7 . 6/22/2014
What I don't like with Jane being taken is that the case has to be investigated without his help...will the team be able to find them ?

Meanwhile, Lisbon and Mallory got separated again...
I take it Lisbon is now with a bruised, hurt Jane...
What's the kidnappers's point ? What do they want ? What's the plan ?
What did they make this video for ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 6 . 6/22/2014
Just when Jane find the connection between Burke and Lacey and the kidnapping of his family, he's taken too.
A note is left, with RJ's smiley. I can't help but wonder if this is the real deal or a copycat...after all Burke regretted that Rj had already taken care of Jane's family...so he could very well decide to have it his way with jane's second family...and faking it to be RJ's work.
Or RJ could really be involved...but I'm not so sure anymore... (this is what happens when one read your stories on a regular basis : they learn not to take things at face value).
I'm basically confused, unsure of what to think...but loving it !
Jane Doe51 chapter 5 . 6/22/2014
Mallory is with her mother...that's the bright side to Lisbon's abduction.
Jane was sent a proof of life...he needs to decide on a curse of action, now...
Love the team trying to protect Jane and get the work done at the same time !
Jane Doe51 chapter 4 . 6/22/2014
Is it really RJ who has Mallory and Lisbon ? I mean...it could be him, playing Jane fits the character...but there's no proof it's him. It could be anyone holding a grudge against Jane, for all we maybe I'm wondering too many questions...

One more, though : who's Raymond Burke ? What's the connexion with Jane ? Why and how did Jane put him behind bars ? What's his MO ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 3 . 6/22/2014
Two suspects...is RJ really one of them ?

Wow...You had Jane scared to death for no reason and he barely had the time to find Teresa that she's taken. Let's hope she's at least reunited with her daughter...
Now Jane has to do what Lisbon told him to do : find them. Not that he needed the order but let's hope it will get him focused on the task at hand !
Jane Doe51 chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
Looks like Jane & Lisbon will be there for each other...that's a relief...
I love Jane's protectiveness, how he's setting things up for Lisbon to be as safe as possible and the way he's refering to her as 'his wife'...which she is...but I love that he doesn't call her 'Lisbon' or 'the boss' in this instance.

So there's two leads : the woman who seemingly took Mallory and the list of men being recently released from jail.
If RJ doesn't want to kill Mallory...what's his point, then ? Making Jane aware that he could do it, were it decided to ?

And of course I love Jane & Lisbon together...Lisbon's words of reassurance, easing Jane's guilt. And her determination with the 'find us' remark. Yes, they will find her...there's no ther way since they won't stop searching for her until she's back home...
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