PLEASE UPDATE SOON! poor Siri and Remmy

Update! PLEASE! - LUV the story!

I would want nothing to do with Lily and James Potter if I were Harry. To know that my folks did not give me up because they couldn't care for me the way I should be cared for but had instead tossed me away like a piece of trash because I was suddenly no longer an important piece of their lives would enrage me. I also wonder how Rosie will grow up. Pompous and arrogant? And what would she think of her brother?

...Not bitter? Really? Having grown up with petunia, Lily should have known better than to leave her child alone with that bitch. I mean, give me a break. Giving up your son so you can concentrate exclusively on your daughter? How could the son NOT grow up to be bitter?

liking it so far more pls

OK first I want you to know that I say this not as a flame but as someone trying to help you write at your best.

You are going very fast through everything and maybe need to re-write the chapters so they go a bit slower.

You skipped from the cottage to Dumbledore's office with out so much as an explanation for example. You could have put in a line and put 'A few hours later the Potter's were in the Headmaster's Office discussing the nights events and what it meant for their family.'

It would give an explanation of where they were and slow it down.

I hope you take my advice to heart because this could be a great fic.

Personally loving this so far, cant wait to see Harry when he comes back. Hehehe

Omg! Write More! PLEASE! Reading this is so suspenseful, PLEASE write more! I really wanna find out what happens next!

This feels far too rushed and I don't believe Lily and James, or any parent for that matter, would give up their baby so easily. It would have been better if James and Lily were gradually worn down and eventually convinced over a long period of time, or perhaps they even discovered Harry's Parslemouth ability or residue dark magic from the killing curse, and some reason was invented for why he needed to be separated, anything other than "Well because," as this is what you have at the moment.

It doesn't make sense and feels unrealistic,
Regards,
Brodus

LIKE, LIKE, LIKE! GO MOONY! XD

great story!

Excellent looking forward to another chapter from you soon.

Merlin was right if Harry had been left with teh dursleys I think the Potters and dumbledore would have been facing a new dark lord.

I do hope this will not be harry forgiving the Potters and instead will work hard to spoil dumbledore's plans. If teh founders are teazching him he should be able to take control of hogwarts shocking dumbledore and co.

If Harry defeats Voldermort maybe he can use his fame to get Lily adn James thrown into azkaban and get control of teh Potter family fortune maybe even disowning rose if she is a spoilt bitch.

Oh how I love you! Sure I read DR first... i freaken LOVE it! But this... im in love with your work! No kidding... well these two and poor Siri and Remy their cub is missing poor things! Im glad you are trying to keep them together but anyway I. WANT. MORE!

ok chapter, though short a interesting story i hope you finish it

Wonderful new chapter! I am so glad that Remus and Sirius didn't forgive the Potters for throwing Harry away. Hopefully being raised by the founders will make Harry powerful enough to face Dumbledore and put an end to him. Maybe Lily and James can be ruined too at the same time?

Thank you for the update! Please update again soon!