Reviews for Twins: A Different Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! Pop in pop out Merlin! I love how Sirius and Remus are good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's see how this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, liking this story and looking forward to seeing how it develops. Only criticism is the first sentence, I think there were some extra words and wrong grammar, but that sort of stuff is easily fixed. Looking forward thought to future chapters :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to bad, but it is too short to say much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds really interesting...how do u hav such a good imagination...im jealous! please keep writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay new dark harry story i love these storys |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks good so far. One request, please don't make this a bashing session (besides Dumbles) too much. that's one thing that really annoys me with a lot of stories that have such promising starts like this. they sometimes lose the story and the plot with way too much bashing going on. But i'm sure you are a smart writer and wont do such a thing :) Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() new story i love your stories, your the best author |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the twins plot and I can't wait to see how your spin with Merlin on it will go! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Love Dark Repercussions as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking the look of this story. Can't wait to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() Excellent beginning to your story! I am so glad that Merlin rescued Harry from the Dursley's abuse. Thank goodness he will have a chance to learn and grow away from his useless parents and Dumbledore's manipulations. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent looking forward to chapter 2 |
![]() ![]() Seems interesting, but I don't think anyone would give up their child so they could give more attention to the famous one. It just doesn't seem like something that James and Lily would do. |