Creo que empeze a leer hace mucho esta historia.. Al menos el. Primer capítulo lo recuerdo.. Solo espero que no esté en pausa porque me va a dar mucho coraje

I absolutely love this story and couldn't put it down! Please update again soon! You are a very talented writer!

It's been 4 years since your last update, I really hope you update soon. This book was too good to put down.

I hope you do more with this one. Posible even fix the twin's twin bound somehow and reunite them.

Alright, I'm out. The premise was interesting but the whole alliance with Voldemort just ruined it for me. There is also the fact that the story hadn't been updated in years and it doesn't even make it to year two.

This story is really going to drag the summer out, isn't it?

I would just like to see on confrontation between Harry and James without Sirius butting in or otherwise hovering about.

A prank is his answer to Dumbles? How about slipping the story of the stone and the three-headed dog on the third-floor corridor to the press and actually accomplishing something? When it comes to light that the stone was stolen Dumbles would take a massive hit and they could move their plans to press charges against Rose forward but no, let's prank him instead... what an idiot!

The duel was rather anticlimactic if I'm being honest. Also as I said before there is waaaaaaaaay too much smirking in this story. If I had a shot of butterbeer for every time somebody smirked, I would be admitted to the hospital for alcohol poisoning by chapter eight. I am still on the fence about the alliance with Voldemort but I will hold judgment for now.

There is entirely too much smirking in this story.

Dark Harry won't stoop to her level, that is just hilarious.

Okay, this chapter was just silly. In the house quidditch cup, each team plays the three other teams and the overall points determine who the winner is, that's straight-up canon. Commonsense would dictate when there is a tie in the overall standings the cup would go to whichever of those two teams either won the most games or the most snitches during the season, Hogwarts doesn't do rematches. Seeing as how Gryffindor lost the first game against Slytherin and we are led to believe that Slytherin is undefeated this season, the cup would have gone to them by default. This whole chapter felt like manufactured drama for the sole purpose of uniting Harry's support base and giving the readers a reason to like characters that were utterly deplorable in canon.

Then we have the attack itself, Harry's on death's doorstep after a vicious albeit creative attack during a quidditch game where hundreds of people watched. None of the staff thought anything was off about this?! That is utterly ridiculous that not one person in authority does anything to reprimand Rose.

Finally, there is the Slytherin 'retaliation' which is just lame. You nearly killed my friend so I'm going to prank you... sigh. That is just stupid, why not trip the bitch down some stairs or 'accidentally' knock her spoiled ass off of the astronomy tower, you know something equal to the injury inflicted on Harry.

Though in a way Harry had that coming anyway, he pulled that same leap-frog trick multiple times maybe a couple of weeks in the infirmary will teach him not to be so predictable.

Harry seems to be all talk and no action where the Potters are concerned.

Again with the hip thing? That is just so offputting to read and makes me wonder if it's a cultural thing because preteens are generally not carried like toddlers in my country... or the U.K for that matter.

So I'm guessing that Remus is the woman in the relationship hence him scolding Harry for his language.