|Reviews for Second Time Unlucky|
| MJElliot chapter 12 . 5/26/2013
those girls are nasty :( but Maddie on the hand is very interesting to follow. I can't make my mind up about her...nicely written!very interesting plot and up the good work!
| MJElliot chapter 11 . 5/26/2013
Sophia Mellark-Iwas definetly not expecting that! i like the way you described the arena and the bloodbath. lookimg forward to see what happens- but if i had to guess the alliance will soon split in two
| MJElliot chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
oh, the arena sounds really cool:)
| MJElliot chapter 9 . 5/26/2013
I think it's quite difficult for someone so gentle as Ludo to try and behave as arogant as Haymitch, but he pulled through. But what about Maddie's angle?
| MJElliot chapter 8 . 5/26/2013
funny how he thinks that the alliance will get rid of a high scoring person just because he is from an outlying district..if it were me, I'd be affraid of being stabbed in the back for that guy...
| MJElliot chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
would have never imagined a Cato to have a sensitive artistic side. interesting:)
| MJElliot chapter 6 . 5/26/2013
oh good:) i'm glad their on friendly terms
| MJElliot chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
I find Flavius intriguing. can't wait to see what role he will play in the story. also, I'm looking forward to see how(if) the relationship between Ludo and Maddie develops!
| MJElliot chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
i never thought about this posibility...to train your best friend to take your place in the games...interesting idea, looking forward to read more
| Naerin chapter 13 . 4/20/2013
| mangesboy01 chapter 27 . 4/14/2013
I was not expecting it to go this deep! You tied it all back in with the 74th Hunger Games, and this is when it starts.
Amazing story or should I say novel , because this is well over 50,000 words.
I loved your story and I can't wait to start reading Mentor!
| mangesboy01 chapter 26 . 4/14/2013
These last few chapters seem to tie it all up!
I'm loving the whole Cato lineage, and Mellark , I find it really unique that you did it the way you did.
I feel bad for Ludo, can't believed his mom died.
One more chapter :(
| mangesboy01 chapter 25 . 4/14/2013
Ludo's finally going back to District 4, he's finally going to be home.
I'm sad that this story is coming to an end.
I want to commend you on the outstanding backstories, like how you connect the past victors. I don't think people realize how hard that is.
Another awesome chapter!
| mangesboy01 chapter 24 . 4/14/2013
This was by far the funniest chapter. I also think it's really well written!
I really like that you incorporated other victors into this seen, it was really entertaining.
Cato's grandfather seems legit.
Reading this chapter makes me feel sorry for Quintus...
| mangesboy01 chapter 23 . 4/14/2013
Poor Maddie, well at least she want have suffer anymore, or stress about her family.
I hope that Ludo gives some of his winnings to Maddies family, so they won't starve.
You survived the arena!
I like the flashback thing you did about each tribute.