|Reviews for Second Time Unlucky|
| MJElliot chapter 19 . 5/27/2013
this was a very sad chapter :( i liked Sophia...bit it's better she goes like this than killed by some other tribute.
but i have a question regarding her age- aren't eighteen year olds supposed to not be in the reapings?
| MJElliot chapter 17 . 5/27/2013
now that's what i call a cliffhanger
| MJElliot chapter 15 . 5/26/2013
this was very touching-well written :)
| MJElliot chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
i didn't realise it was so close to Peeta's games! me and my math...really good chapter! I like that we get to know more about the characters, especially Sophia, who caught my attention a few chapters back
| MJElliot chapter 12 . 5/26/2013
those girls are nasty :( but Maddie on the hand is very interesting to follow. I can't make my mind up about her...nicely written!very interesting plot and up the good work!
| MJElliot chapter 11 . 5/26/2013
Sophia Mellark-Iwas definetly not expecting that! i like the way you described the arena and the bloodbath. lookimg forward to see what happens- but if i had to guess the alliance will soon split in two
| MJElliot chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
oh, the arena sounds really cool:)
| MJElliot chapter 9 . 5/26/2013
I think it's quite difficult for someone so gentle as Ludo to try and behave as arogant as Haymitch, but he pulled through. But what about Maddie's angle?
| MJElliot chapter 8 . 5/26/2013
funny how he thinks that the alliance will get rid of a high scoring person just because he is from an outlying district..if it were me, I'd be affraid of being stabbed in the back for that guy...
| MJElliot chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
would have never imagined a Cato to have a sensitive artistic side. interesting:)
| MJElliot chapter 6 . 5/26/2013
oh good:) i'm glad their on friendly terms
| MJElliot chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
I find Flavius intriguing. can't wait to see what role he will play in the story. also, I'm looking forward to see how(if) the relationship between Ludo and Maddie develops!
| MJElliot chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
i never thought about this posibility...to train your best friend to take your place in the games...interesting idea, looking forward to read more
| Naerin chapter 13 . 4/20/2013
| writinginpen chapter 27 . 4/14/2013
I was not expecting it to go this deep! You tied it all back in with the 74th Hunger Games, and this is when it starts.
Amazing story or should I say novel , because this is well over 50,000 words.
I loved your story and I can't wait to start reading Mentor!