Reviews for Second Time Unlucky
richards25 chapter 12 . 1/5/2013
Nice to hear what actually happened in the bloodbath and who got who. This is a good chapter to fill us in with details, really good job again. Thank you very much for the shout out, I appreciate it :)
richards25 chapter 11 . 1/4/2013
Ahh the bloodbath is over! It was very good! He has made a kill, that will go down with the Capitol! Nice to see Sophia in there to. I am shock the district 9 boy died, I thought he would have done better! Also at some point can you do a list of the dead please :) Good work though :D
richards25 chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
You did the interviews very well. I like how you went into detail about his interview and didn't just skim over it! Well done :D
richards25 chapter 7 . 1/4/2013
I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I like the description and how he discovers him skills. The alliance is interesting, the sides that have already formed! Looking to the games now :D
richards25 chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
This is a really good chapter! I think my favourite so far! I have never seen someone discuss the ideas behind Avoxs. Wow, brilliant job!
richards25 chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
This is another good chapter, you wrote the parade really well! The careers seem interesting, the One male of example! I also don't trust Maddie, she is up to something. I also really want to know what up with the 12 girl. Wasn't mentioned before!
richards25 chapter 4 . 1/4/2013
Nice work here again! The advice Finnick gave was actually very good! Seems like a good angle to play him in! Well done :D
richards25 chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
Another really good chapter! I really like the description you have in here. The detail is great!
Nice character development with him and Maddie.
All in all very good, nice to see some description of the other characters :)
richards25 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Wow, this is so good! I have really enjoyed it! You should be really proud of this! :D Brilliant!
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