Reviews for Second Time Unlucky
richards25 chapter 7 . 1/4/2013
I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I like the description and how he discovers him skills. The alliance is interesting, the sides that have already formed! Looking to the games now :D
richards25 chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
This is a really good chapter! I think my favourite so far! I have never seen someone discuss the ideas behind Avoxs. Wow, brilliant job!
richards25 chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
This is another good chapter, you wrote the parade really well! The careers seem interesting, the One male of example! I also don't trust Maddie, she is up to something. I also really want to know what up with the 12 girl. Wasn't mentioned before!
richards25 chapter 4 . 1/4/2013
Nice work here again! The advice Finnick gave was actually very good! Seems like a good angle to play him in! Well done :D
richards25 chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
Another really good chapter! I really like the description you have in here. The detail is great!
Nice character development with him and Maddie.
All in all very good, nice to see some description of the other characters :)
richards25 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Wow, this is so good! I have really enjoyed it! You should be really proud of this! :D Brilliant!
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