|Reviews for Beached|
| Caroline Lily-ann Youla chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Whoa, I like it though
| katzsoa chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
"his head went from high in the clouds to far, far below them; fathoms below the ocean's green, frothy surface" - I LOVE this. It's unusual and caught my attention right away.
"they knew no better. Nobody did." He sees himself as the one who has been given sight, though this sight has turned him blind to the simpler beauties of the world.
"The sea did not mock her; the sea did not console her." The sea does not care. Neither, I imagine, does the mermaid.
"He was coral...abandoned by life." Eep. Very good metaphor, but eep.