Reviews for Behind Enemy Lines
Weeping Pegasi chapter 24 . 5/8
AGH My heart! D: I found this story just today and read through all the chapters and I loved it!
karg-18 chapter 24 . 4/12
Wow just Wow... Just finished reading your story and let me tell you that it was great... I believe that you are one talented writer and because of you I am now a fan of Jori... Your story is one of the best Ive ever read in her, so Keep on the good writing :)
ceeramirez14 chapter 24 . 4/8
no my eyeballs aren't sweatinh after that beautiful ending, lmao im not crying
Guest chapter 24 . 3/19
welll, welll, well... dude that was amazing! seriously, the perfect amount of funny, smuttu, fluffy, dramatic, romantic... and I'm so sad u r not writing anything else, nor on this fanfic of other fanfics...absolutely love your work and hope u r doing amazing with ur life... hope u finally got yourself a girl, and that is ehy u don't have time for this anymore... again, sublime mate, good job
snukykid chapter 24 . 3/14
This is one of the best fanatic I've read.
booklover100 chapter 24 . 2/22
This my first time reviewing on a fic and let tell you that this has been one of the greatest stories i have read. And that you are a great writer and very funny too. Thank you do writing this story.
JustKnowItsLove chapter 24 . 2/20
I...I' days...for two days I've taken my time as I read this story, taking in everything, being pulled into this story, and feeling as though I never wanted to get to the ending chapter. As I neared the end, I don't know if it's the lack of sleep (from this darn story) or how well it's written, my heart ached for it to not be nearing the end. I simply couldn't bear a story of this level to end. It's very rare that I will fall asleep reading a story at 12:30 in the morning and wake up around 20 minutes before 4 in the morning only to want to continue reading it. It's not often that I feel a tug at my heart when something cute happens, a pain in my chest when a fight breaks out, a tightening feeling in my throat as my jaw clenches in anticipation as to what will happen in the next few lines I read. It's not often, that I findna story like this, that I truly love, and enjoy. So thank you, thank you for this story. I don't know how long this story was posted ago, I don't know if you'll ever see this, but I do know that this is a story I would read again and know I'll enjoy it just as much.
unimaginee chapter 24 . 2/14
This is one of those stories that i'm disappointed when it ends. You probably don't read these reviews anymore but if this somehow gets to you then i just want to say thank you for taking to write this amazing story.
Dragoncatcher123 chapter 24 . 1/19
Super freaking amazing story! Love it soooooo much
L.herlg chapter 24 . 1/11
I really enjoyed this story, it was brilliant. I also enjoyed your AN's very much. Thank you for taking the time to write it.
Guest chapter 24 . 12/14/2014
This is literally the best fanfiction I've ever read. It tooke forever to read it and I loved that. Every word made me want to read more. You're an amazing writer. Thank you for letting me have the awesome experience of reading such a great story.
Hinatawolf chapter 24 . 12/1/2014
This story is flippin amazing...dang what a great story...i love stories like this. The ones that give you a nice warm felling in your gut and puts a smile on your face. Thanks a whole bunch:)
Cardinal R chapter 10 . 11/15/2014
I like it!

Not a complaint, but the bar fight scene made me think of this: /Main/GrievousBottleyHarm
Jessi1612 chapter 24 . 11/12/2014
This is the best fanfic I've ever read. Your writing is really good and the story was incredible. It was so good I didn't wanted it to end
DSW2496 chapter 24 . 10/11/2014
Good sweet lord that was one hell of a romantic story; as a sappy, diehard romantic, slow builds like this(I read it in a few hours.) do my heart good. It helps that I ship the Hell outta Jori.

Thanks for this story and the hard work you obviously put into this

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