|Reviews for A Crack in the Door|
| Paliia chapter 20 . 9/29
Loved loved loved it!
Thank you for sharing :3:3:3
| QueenGB chapter 19 . 3/13
Gracious this is still one of the sweetest and truly lovely stories I’ve read here. Thanks for keeping it here for me to return to. Be well.
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/8
It's a laundry CHUTE, not SHOOT.
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/8
Gah! Don't use asterisks in plural nouns! They're meant for possessives and contractions.
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/7
The sun PEEKS through the blinds, not PEAKS.
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/7
You wrote "not shower together. Fuck. Unless you want too" It's "Unless you want TO (which is understood to mean "to shower together")." TOO means only "very" or "also."
Look it up if you don't believe me.
| crackupmonkey chapter 20 . 2/8/2022
Love! Love! Love this story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/1/2021
Thanks for your time
| Secretrevenge chapter 19 . 9/23/2021
Cape Cod is a place I’ve forever wanted to visit, maybe even live for a while. I’m partial to stories set there or other places on the New England coast, so, this story was doubly delightful. I loved all the characters. This was the best Charlie ever. Alice and Jasper…how sweet they were and so entertaining. Jasper went back to his bunker. Priceless.
| QueenGB chapter 19 . 9/2/2021
Le sigh. So happy and so sad at the same time. I love when you leave a story as though all is well and even if you crave more you know it’s not necessary. Thank you, from one voracious reader to a lovely writer.
| QueenGB chapter 18 . 9/2/2021
I have a major case of the feels darling. This has been the best story I have read all summer that is new. Meaning, I go to my favorites when the story wells are dry and they have been until now. This is now a beloved gem too. Honestly even the pets are joyful. So much good between the cracks. I hate it to end but I will be back again and again and again. Amazing! Thank you so much. Be safe and good things to you and yours.
| QueenGB chapter 17 . 9/2/2021
Please, please, please don’t move Charlie back to Forks. He’s so good for Bella and Teddy. After all the loss it’s good for Charlie too. I love the ease and joy of the chapter and the full circle moment at the end with the Tony couple. Joyful.
| QueenGB chapter 16 . 9/2/2021
There are three things I know for certain…
1. I love that Bella calls Edward Teddy.
2. I adore this Charlie to pieces.
3. They all need to start over as a family together;-) and Charlie needs to find a good woman. He deserves it.
What a great chapter amongst so many other great chapters.
| QueenGB chapter 14 . 9/1/2021
I had a feeling papa Chuck was on his way. I would have been too. Full circle on Tyler and his abusive lover. And Bella will be creative again. All good things.
| QueenGB chapter 12 . 9/1/2021
Does anyone else wonder if Charlie grew impatient and caught a flight to The Cape? That chapter was lovely by the way.