Reviews for End of the Road
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 1/14
I was wondering why she disconnected that starter at the beginning . . . then told Jasper her car broke down. I quickly got sucked up in the story and forgot all about it, until Edward asked her later. HA! This was a treat. How do I not know where Oakdale is? I've lived in SF my whole life. Found it! Went and checked out a map . . . I've been out there, just forgot where it was. That is quite a bit east of here. Everyone was so very welcoming and nice. Jasper went above and beyond that first night, with the drink, the food, the room to stay in and the towing of her car across the street. Alice, Rosalie and Emmett were wonderful. Edward was very accommodating . . . in more ways than one . . . hehehe. Very enjoyable chapter. I liked the little article at the end too. Cool.
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
cute :) Thanks for sharing. xo
A chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
I love the fact that this story is set in my hometown!
Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
excellent story.
momma2fan chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Great job! Any plans to continue or give a futuretake or EPOV?
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
i really enjoyed this! thanks for writing and sharing! chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I love the fact you have used a town I live half an hour from as the backdrop.
raidershell chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I just had to read this again! Loved it just as much as I did the first time!
Now I really need to make that visit to Oakdale...
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
lovely and sweet
thanks for sharing!
jesslwells chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Loved it :)
debslmac chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
:) loved this story
tawelephant chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Yeah! Thank you for something fun and happy. Loved it!