|Reviews for Smile, and Remember the Memories|
| aliceWALKER14 chapter 1 . 4/24
okay...i so FUCKIN CRY IN THIS CHAPTER !
this was so sadd n adorable and sweet at the same time...TTTT
| AugustInk chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
| ASliverOfHope chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
This is so heart breaking and beautifully written, it made me cry, but I loved it. I like how it was written through another character's eyes but still showed all the love that Allen has for Lavi.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Oh, geez. You made me cry! hehe Sorry that it is only now that i can review, the story is super good even though it's kinda short(for me). geez you really made me cry, even in school when i remember it, i want to oh the way you describe the event its very good the way you describe every emotion (oh geez ;.;) you made me feel it. so keep up the good work, your awesome
| Bunnyhuger chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I loved it! It was so sad I cried all trough it
| LunaWalker chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Wow I am speechless this fanfiction was very sad and I was crying from when they said lavi was dying and did not stop crying when I was reading this I felt like I was Allen feeling all that pain I felt like I was transported into the story. I know how it feels to loose someone you love back in march my grandfather passed away, I tried to be happy for everyone but I couldn't do it. I wasn't eating, I wasn't sleeping, I wasn't doing my school work I wasn't doing anything I just shut down I cried every other night and I forced my self to be happy around other people but I just snapped I couldn't smile a true smile anymore I still can't. I feel deeply that I can relate to this story and I can honestly say you have done a fantastic job at capturing people's emotions. You are a phenomenal writer. Thank you
| Fate Alitheia chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Aw... poor allen... i want to hug him... well nice story there.
| Booklover2526 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I cried and I cried and I cried! This was soo sad but beautiful I couldn't help it
| ilanitaliaXD chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
*dry throat and watery eyes* it's like what Kanda would say: hypocrisy is his grandest
Allen, you're a great person that cannot put himself in front of people. but when you do, you do it in private, huh?
that scream just ripped my heart to pieces and i couldn't even breath from my agony.
a beautiful story that made me review (which is rare). don't stop writing (but please write happier ones *sob*), and good job