|Reviews for Infinite Stratos: Athena|
| Fireminer chapter 9 . 9/10/2013
Rarely read OC-centric story, but you impressed me. Looking forward to the next update!
| Kosuke-Dono chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Magnificent chapter, as always... and take your time in your hiatus period.. as they said quality OVER quantity.. :)
| Lord Mehtul Bawkes chapter 8 . 3/12/2013
Interesting work you have there. It's a pity that you haven't had A review in some time.
Still, it's intriguing the way you have done your work. Most people just make a Anti IS weapon and throw it at the IS. The angle of your work is a welcome change from the story, as it is. I will be following it closely.
| 017Bluefield chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
A few pointers:
*"yeap" — "yeah"
*"storey" — "story"
Otherwise, nice work.
| Kosuke-Dono chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
At long last your rewrite of Athena! Well I hope you'll update this speedy considering this is a rewrite because I want to know what happens next to Arisawa since he’s comatose, that is IF you didn’t change the original Trilogy, (Or if you decided to compress all three into one, long story..)
| 017Bluefield chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Niiiice. :) Word of advice, though: try *showing* more than *telling* - the reboot's still slightly predictable. :/
| FeartheMightyToothpick chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Can I give you an OC?
His Name is Luke Lincoln. He's from Ireland, so I guess he could be their representative. He has short messy golden brown hair, sharp forest green eyes, medium brow, a strong jaw, and a blackened scar across the back of his neck.
Luke is a mechanical genius, but not in the same way as other geniuses. He has a powerful research method: constant vigilance, risk everything, Look EVERYWHERE. He is much more creative in his theory research, so that he gathers plausible theories from the most ridiculous things- places NOBODY else would care to look. Luke is a modest boy most places, but he gets a bit arrogant in the workshop.
His personal IS is called Force Nova, and is a very dark green, almost Black, with white energy and rust orange highlights. the legs resemble a wolves, only more upright. the hands resemble a large dragon's claw on the left, and a knight's gauntlet on the right. it has wing boosters that resemble a warped vortex, and it's headgear looks like a Native American Chieftain crown, only dark green with Orange, and shorter. Luke Designed and built Force Nova himself(for the most part-not the Core).
It can generate condensed rapid fire energy beams of various degrees from the left hand and it has something similar to Ichika's sword(only with two 'Rails') that it can wield in the other. The Force Nova also has a boost mode called the Glory Star, in which the energy is so condensed the suit shines bright gold and forest green that enables the user to go up to Mach 5(Is that too much? if so, mach 1 or 2), that the attacks are Conductive, the attacks are much stronger. Also, a plasma booster pack in the feet and wings for acrobatic dodging/nimble dashing.
Force Nova's most powerful weapon is a hidden Railgun installed into the sword, that cannot be stopped by a forcefield, but can be dodged if you see it coming soon enough (it's FAST), or blocked by a shield(but you still take quite a bit of damage depending on how strong the shield is). The railgun is Force Nova's last resort, as the power output required will shut down the systems after the second or third shot until Force Nova achieves Second shift(if it ever does).
| DarkJak2050 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
It's about time you re-posted this. And I'll say that this re-make's better than what you originally had.
Particularly, details on Inami's background and past. Something that wasn't really in the beginning of the original.
Keep it up, man.