Reviews for Welcome to Hertfordshire, Mr Hastings
Hobo Pixie Cow chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
This story is fun. Can't wait for more.
darcygirl76 chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
I enjoyed the first two chapters and look forward to see where this story goes.
Astonishment chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Hastings seems to be a formidable rival for Darcy and he already has a great start with Elizabeth! Maybe Caroline can work her charms on him as well!
I like how he isn't as proper as everyone else.
LBug chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
You've set things up nicely here in this chapter. Hastings is a really interesting character so I can't wait to see what he stirs up knowingly and unknowingly.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Really interesting begining. Who will Mr Hastings fall in love with? Looking forward to reading more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Promising start. I like the idea of deja vu and Mr B realising Mrs B got the better of him.
Sissinghurst chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
This looks really promising! I'm already disposed to like Mr. Hastings as a fellow nature lover. He and Lizzy will probably hit it off right away...looking forward to the continuation!
YepItsMe chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Great beginning! Mrs B is clever, using his favoritism of Lizzy as a bargaining chip. Though I think there's a part of Mr Bennet that is in no hurry for Lizzy to find a match at all. Mr Hastings sounds like his personality will be great with Lizzy's, which should make Darcy crazy jealous. Maybe he will be too preoccupied with that to separate Bingley from Jane.
evonna chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
The premise sounds brilliant, would love to see a jealous Darcy!
Can't wait for more! xxxx
Abstractly Sydney chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I like all of your stories!
justlovefanfiction2901 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I LOVE IT! AaaaHhhHh!
God I love the idea very, very, very much...
I don't mind however you respond to the reviews, or if you don't want to respond its still ok, we all have a real which is a complete biotch...
LBug chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I'm hooked. I love it when Darcy gets some early competition (it's what you are implying?) for Lizzy's affections. I also liked the expert maneuvering by Mrs Bennet.
Lilifvorr chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
so far i enjoyed the first chapter can't wait till the next.
La-Laurie chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Very promising, I hope you continue.
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