|Reviews for Until the Time is Right|
| serenityselena chapter 16 . 1/4
fantastic story :)
| patolozka chapter 16 . 12/28/2013
OMG, I love this tale;-) It was full of surprices for me and full of new ideas, there are not much "detective" stories in HP world. I found only two of them and this one is third. I like your Stanton and Nicholas. And Severus, oh, hes wonderful. And I like the way how Lucius ended, I think that Severus was right when he said that Luc would react otherwise if he knew who the house belonged to... And I like your descbription of imtimate momments between the two of them. I think I like your bond as well because its nice and thanks to it they could feel love and joy and paece... So, thank you very much for it! And since I know there is continuation Im looking forward to it!
| patolozka chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
Oh, the confirmation ritual was so beautiful! Im glad that both of them came to their senses, I was a bit worried about them.
I like the idea of different Severus characters, Nicholas could be very nice person. And Harrys jelousy was cute! Thank you!
| patolozka chapter 5 . 12/26/2013
Oh, I started this story yesterday when I was looking for something nice to read (I dont have time to read nearly month or so) and I love it. I like you Severus, he is not cruel, but gentle and sarcastic yes, but its him, the man who knows what he wants and goes for it in a good way. And Harry. Yes, I like Harry very much, matured, good in his job, clever. The tension between them is almost palpable! Thank you for it, I am looking forward to go on reading!
| riya.meel.5 chapter 16 . 11/14/2013
This is such a wonderful fic.. Its amazing.. I dont hv words to describe hw m feeling after reading this.. U r such an amazing writer... Keep up... 3 :* :)
| Strawberry Danger chapter 16 . 10/29/2013
One of the best snarry stories I've read in a long time, cannot wait to read the sequels. :)
| Girl-luvs-manga chapter 16 . 9/15/2013
Finally! They love each other aww
| Kezzasilver chapter 16 . 8/3/2013
That was dam awesome.
| KneazleGriff chapter 16 . 7/20/2013
Well done! I really enjoyed reading this. Lovely budding Snarry romance embedded within a very intriguing poisoning plot. Really complex...you handled it very well. And, Good Lord! That final love scene was divine. Perfect. :)
Now I can move onto your next story. Yay! :D
| Dontgotaclue88 chapter 16 . 7/18/2013
Ghosh! So fracking beautiful and awesome! .
| KneazleGriff chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
I love this fic so far! SO SMART the way have been able to give us an alternate perspective of all that we know from canon. I know how hard that is to do... and I applaud you for your efforts! I am already completely addicted to this story. :)
| Kitty Savella chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
A very Lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed.
| Badbonita chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
I had a strange idea whenSeverus said the following: "In all my research I never found a bonded pair talked about whose ages were as greatly different as ours."
What if Harry was actually born nearer the time Severus was born but died young. So he had to be born again?
Not to give you another possible plot bunny but I can easily see the possibility of it falling into your series.
Sorry, felt I just had to let you know this quirky idea that struck me. . . .
| inu382 chapter 2 . 6/21/2013
Ah, okay. It's been corrected by this chapter. Perhaps it's a good idea to go back and fix the first chapter, to avoid more know-it-alls correcting your Japanese. ;)
As far as content, it is intriguing. It's well written, it's all in one tense, and it's interesting and different from things I've read before.
| inu382 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Sorry, that was bothering me.