|Reviews for I Want A Mommy!|
| bellaedward5 chapter 11 . 10/22/2013
I like your story, it's great
| BookWarm16 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Love this story ...can't wait for me
| twilightobession chapter 11 . 10/18/2013
WOW! I can not believe that Edward is taking time away for all of his businesses right now with everything going the way it is. But I love that he is wanting/needing to have time with Bella and EJ. That is so sweet. Loved their love making on that balcony.
OMGosh! I just noticed that you have not updated in a while. I HOPE you are going to finish this story. I need to know what happens with Edward/Bella/EJ! I know you write for fun but I REALLY REALLY hope you update soon.! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
| twilightobession chapter 10 . 10/18/2013
Esme has been concern with Bella being so young, but Bella is not worried about standing up to Edward and I am glad that she does not let him push her around.
OMGosh! I can not believe that Edward's father helped James make Bella have an abortion. I am wondering if Edward will ever tell Bella of his father's involvement?
| twilightobession chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
Who is tormenting Edward/Bella? Edward will kill them when he finds out. I am thinking that Edward has a "mole" in his camp. How else would they know about his engagement? I am glad that Emmett seems to be happy for Edward even if the rest of his family is not. Glad that Bella did not freak out about having to go in the safe room. Wow, she had a gun! I wonder what Edward is going to think about that? I love that you include little EJ into this story line. I know the title of this story is "I want a Mommy" but a lot of writers put the kids in the beginning of the story and then hardly mention them again. I like how you have Edward and Bella have lots on interaction with EJ.
| twilightobession chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
I can not believe that he brought the contract! That was soooooo wrong. I loved what he said to but bring the contract and talking about, that was just wrong. Who in the world burned down his restaurant ? This is getting really good.
| twilightobession chapter 7 . 10/18/2013
Ok, from this chapter, I am assuming that James may have been the football captain and that he and Bella were an item. I am also assuming that maybe Bella got pregnant with James' baby and he made her have an abortion. Was that the trouble that Edward's father helped him get out of?
I love Edward's reaction to Bella recording EJ's play. I am wondering about Edward and Bella's relationship, have they slept together yet? I am thinking not but just wanted to be sure.
| twilightobession chapter 6 . 10/18/2013
I am so glad that Bella went to EJ when he needed her. I smiled when she fired the nanny. I just wished that she had slapped her really. lol. I am also happy that Bella finally told Edward about the texts. If anyone can get to the bottom of who is doing this Edward and his team can.
| twilightobession chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
Thank you for telling us what happened to EJ's mother. I have been meaning to ask about her. Glad that Bella feels ok with asking Edward questions. Who was watching Edward/Bella at the club? Who is calling her and not saying anything? This sounds like it is going to get very very interesting.
| twilightobession chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
Glad that they at least got some time at the zoo together. I was a little surprised that Edward was leaving EJ with Bella but I also realized that his men were still there with them. Glad that she feels some what comfortable in his house since it will be her house too someday. Glad that housekeeper seems to like her.
| twilightobession chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
I am glad to see that your Bella is not a push over. I am glad that she "demand" something from Edward. She will be able to hold her on with Edward and keep him on his toes. Edward's mother worries me just a little.
| twilightobession chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
I forgot to say in my last review that I love the instant connections that Bella and EJ seem to have. WOW! Talk about moving fast, Edward does not waste any time. If I were Bella I would think that Edward is crazy! lol
Love the little funny with Emment and Chia's youngest daughter. lol.
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Oh! I feel so sorry for EJ. Edward seems to really care for his son but he just does not know how to show his son.
| notsurewhattoput chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
love it love it love it.
| elle hagewood chapter 11 . 10/2/2013
such a great story