Reviews for Beso
MMiighty chapter 7 . 5/9/2022
Really well written angst/slow burn InuKag. Loved it thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/16/2021
Seriously? Kagome spent a week in her time wallowing in her own self-pity while her friend was trapped in the Shikon no Tama? And the reason she went back wasn’t to get ther free but to apologize to Inu-Yasha? What have you done Kagome’s character? She would never put her own selfish love woes over her friend’s wellbeing. especially as she’s aware Kikyō is dead and she’s the only one who can purify the jewel. This is laughable.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2021
Kagame going off on Kikyo about dragging Inuyasba to hell is both completely out of character and really bad timing. They’re standing in front of a massacre by Naraku and she’s worried about her jealousy? Her points aren’t wrong but not once did Kagame lash out at Kikyo in front of Inuyasha nor did she indicate that sort of vitriol. And then to do so in front of everyone while they’re focused on a horrible thing Naraku did is childish to the extreme. Not gonna lie, It makes Kikyo look a hell of a lot more mature and ready for a relationship and seems like Kagome needs to grow up a bit and get over her own selfishness first.
ushmie chapter 7 . 7/28/2019
It’s been like a thousand years and I still love this.
Aijin chapter 7 . 1/18/2019
So amazing! I love this story in it's entirety. Your writting is so incredible and I thank you for sharing it with us. Hugs
Guest chapter 7 . 5/12/2018
This was well paced and you got the emotions through very well. One thing I'd like to point out is to be careful of your word choices. Effeminate does not mean what I think you wanted it to mean. Similarly, 'faint' and 'feint', 'timbre' and 'timber' were used inappropriately. Overall, great job!
DoesntMatter chapter 7 . 6/2/2016
Also, I really appreciate that you stayed away from the whole graphic sex thing everyone seems to put in their stories.
DoesntMatter chapter 7 . 6/2/2016
I've been a closet Inuyasha fanfic freak well over a decade and this is the first one I've ever commented on. This was the cutest most satisfying story I've read. Seriously, so great. You really gave Kagome what she was lacking in the actual anime (dignity) and somehow still managed to capture and amplify the best parts of the Inu/Kag dynamic. Seeing as this was published 14ish years ago you'll probably never read this but I just had to at least try to give you props! GREAT JOB.
satomika chapter 7 . 12/11/2015

FableTheWolf7 chapter 7 . 2/19/2015
Egads, egads, egads. Liked the story, but you should really watch it about using the same word every chance you get. No one says it anymore and it gets old really fast.
onetimecomin chapter 7 . 2/7/2015
I couldn't stop reading this. I applaud you.
eri.hikaruaddict chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
HA! TAKE YOUR OWN MEDICINE INUYASHA! u dont know how glad i read this chap, it remember me how i hate him when he go after kikyou,
jessi chapter 7 . 6/6/2013
Great story!
raining-down-hearts chapter 4 . 1/18/2013
Wegg-Hime chapter 7 . 11/21/2012
This has got to be one of the greatest love stories between Kagome and Inuyahsa I have EVER have made my life a million times better in those 7 chapters I'm so awed at how amazing your writing was and how you really captured the characters and their personalities!

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