Reviews for Half-Breed
Guest chapter 28 . 2/26/2022
uh no there isnt
Edoc'sil mor'ranr chapter 28 . 12/17/2020
Edoc'sil mor'ranr chapter 8 . 12/17/2020
Joseph chapter 28 . 11/16/2018
You said there would be an epilogue five years ago
Shadowolf chapter 16 . 5/31/2018
I read the little part that said these are not men but monsters blah blah(not that it's unimportant I'm just to lazy to type it all out) and I felt the INSPIRATION..that sounded so much better in my head XD
Potato Tomato chapter 28 . 8/4/2017
Potato Tomato chapter 17 . 8/4/2017
No offense ( I am amazed that you came out with this story in less than a year), but I think that an edit of this story would prove wonders for the reading experience. For example, you said that Blodhgarm is more wolf than animal, and I think you meant more wolf than human.
Totem-Mimikyu chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
Lol. I really like the "one does not simply walk into a cave." That was so hilarious, I started coughing and choking.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2017
I really like this,however a couple of questions.1. Why do they hate half-breeds, I know you said they believe that half-breeds are abominations but why? 2. I saw in one of your athuor notes that you said half-breeds are far stronger than there normal counterparts so when it comes to the varden wouldn't they see the benefit of have 500 super strong soldiers/mages in there army? If someone could write a review or something like that i'd appreciate it any love the story so far.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/4/2017
I just looked it up on google and dora the explorer Has been around for 10 years but that was in 2010 but since it still continue s shes been around 6 years old for 17 years
Gimli chapter 17 . 11/21/2016
Because "Nobody tosses a dwarf." XD
kaleb again chapter 24 . 1/22/2016
i love how u can write so fast and still make it great
ur awesome bro
kaleb bass chapter 23 . 1/22/2016
did u really have to kill off the dragons i cant get over that saphira is gone ,made me cry
veagleeyev chapter 28 . 8/5/2015
People seem to be under the impression that getting stabbed through the heart is an instant dead. Sorry to crush your Hollywood, folks, but that is not the case.
Granted, after around fifteen seconds, you wouldn't be conscious, but it could take a few minutes or an hour. It really is circumstantial, but only something that would immediately shut off the brain would result in an instant death. (Or a backstab, if you play TF2.)
The human body is a lot more resilient than we give it credit for. Abraham Lincon received a bullet through the back of his head, and without modern medicine, lasted the night, at home, in his bed. Granted, he wasn't conscious, but he still lasted the night. So yeah. Getting stabbed through the heart? Slow and painful. At least you wouldn't be conscious for most of it.
veagleeyev chapter 18 . 8/4/2015
Again, you wrote Eragon as having sight... He's blind...
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