|Reviews for Where the Devil Lurked|
| Tanyanana chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
Its good but I personally think that it could be a bit more interesting and start from when the mother or father was adopted or taken in by another family,this is were it doesn't make any sense. And also make it more detailed and longer this story doesn't have any of the childrens names in or anything. I'm sorry to say that i have have read better virtual family stories and this has disappointed me...
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
oh my God virtual families fanfic actually exsists I'm crying
| ILoveWillRiker chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
This was pretty funny. I find the birthing system absolutely ridiculous too...