|Reviews for Comfort|
| simbagirl chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Just one thing.
First you write:
"Time seemed to be speeding up. She wasn't ready. She wasn't sure she would ever be ready."
And then a few sentences later:
"They felt ready now; all they needed was the baby."
Left me a little confused...
| simbagirl chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Westen, not Weston.
A few grammatical errors, other than that, it was pretty good :D
| FMSMandi chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
| LN8866 chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Awwwwww! So sweet!
| yumnarai23 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Westen! My bad..He He
| Veefall chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I always love the baby stories. There are so many ways that the whole scenario can play out and I want those two to be happy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Love it! Btw his name is Westen not Weston
| FMSMandi chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Great start. Couple of grammatical errors. No biggie. I can't wait to read more of this.
| southpawokpoet chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Excellent, thank you. more
| LN8866 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Thats so sweet! :)