Reviews for Comfort
simbagirl chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Just one thing.

First you write:

"Time seemed to be speeding up. She wasn't ready. She wasn't sure she would ever be ready."

And then a few sentences later:

"They felt ready now; all they needed was the baby."

Left me a little confused...
simbagirl chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Westen, not Weston.

A few grammatical errors, other than that, it was pretty good :D
FMSMandi chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
LN8866 chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Awwwwww! So sweet!
yumnarai23 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Westen! My bad..He He
Veefall chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I always love the baby stories. There are so many ways that the whole scenario can play out and I want those two to be happy.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Love it! Btw his name is Westen not Weston
FMSMandi chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Great start. Couple of grammatical errors. No biggie. I can't wait to read more of this.
southpawokpoet chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Excellent, thank you. more
LN8866 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Thats so sweet! :)