Reviews for Fair's fair
docaqi chapter 16 . 5/30
please do continue the story story telling character build up and writing are all excellent
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 16 . 5/29
the ending made NO sense actually it was like the ending from an entirely different story was added.

I'm making chapter 15 the ending even though it's not a true ending.

Other than that I really enjoyed this story. It was an interesting idea.
Nekoninja1107 chapter 14 . 1/30
interesting how the one who longed to be a hero eventually became the villain...
god eater chapter 6 . 1/17
this fic is so good! omg
bloodyrose183 chapter 16 . 11/25/2020
Heww, a great work I just say, normally the fanfics make Lord Minato and Lady Kushina really evil and all if not that something other which is disturbing. But this was so so much better , hell I'll say one of the very few fanfic I will ever like, ur work was just so so damn awesome author sama
Like I been reading this till 4 of morning even knowing the today was a inspection at scl, hell I was late for class a bit but online class saves so yay to that
Regardless it was so so worth it, ur work is like really really awesome
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 16 . 10/22/2020
I really enjoyed this story! (Even the one-shot that was added at the end)

I really hope that you continue this in a sequel, but there's enough information to end this story where it is and still leave the reader satisfied. The logical insanity that you developed over the course of the story was brilliantly executed. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time and finished reading within a day because I couldn't put it down. Wonderful job!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/4/2020
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,... Just kidding
Overture OTSW chapter 16 . 8/18/2020
Wow, it's a shame you canceled the sequel, but it would be very interesting to read. If it's the outcome you were looking for, it's better to have the end in mind and how you're going to get there.
ramsesjames05 chapter 2 . 8/17/2020
I like this story
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2020
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,...
iacopo.passerini chapter 2 . 7/29/2020
Ottimo!
Sideways23 chapter 1 . 6/7/2020
:WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,...
JustDusty chapter 16 . 6/5/2020
What the fuck happened? you skipped 10 chapters after chapter 15 and wrote a whole fucking different kakashi time travel story in a few chapters?
did naruto merge with the darker naruto? did he kill tobi? what the fuck happened?
JustDusty chapter 13 . 6/5/2020
Dude, if you end up turning the MC into that loud obnoxious little shithead claiming to become Hokage i will find you, break your arms and burn them in front of you.
i was hoping the leaf would burn with all the hints you've been dropping about how rotten it is.
to me, the leaf isn't the "good" village out of the five, it's just the one with the best liars
Thecrazygirlnextdoor101 chapter 16 . 5/11/2020
This is the most beautiful Naruto story I ever read in my life. I didn’t know I needed this until I read your story. Thank you for writing and sharing you ideas. I’m deeply grateful for this opportunity to read such great literature. Hands down this is the best story I read about Naruto. I already put it down as my favorite ! I hope you don’t delete this account or story, cause I want to keep and read this story again and again. Love you works !
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