Reviews for Vikings Never Learn to Fly
Zoha Ven chapter 12 . 4/10
I cried seven tears. I counred. It is a new record! Which means this chapter is the most touching story I have read. One of them anyway. Amazing.
Zoha Ven chapter 10 . 4/10
Wow. Who knew Hiccup could be broken like that?
It is an amazing story! You have real talent for making plots and expressing yourself. You should keep writing amazing, again.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/10
AppleSpongeCake chapter 14 . 10/24/2015


AppleSpongeCake chapter 12 . 10/23/2015

Narrow escape there.

The threat from my last review is still present...
AppleSpongeCake chapter 11 . 10/23/2015
You better thank your lucky stars.

Had you killed Hiccup, I would have snuck into your house and kidnapped you, then tortured you slowly, and finally kill you with a homemade weapon of my own design.

AppleSpongeCake chapter 7 . 10/23/2015
AppleSpongeCake chapter 6 . 10/23/2015

Apparently not, but still, Hiccup's getting away!
AppleSpongeCake chapter 4 . 10/23/2015

This is basically the Hunger Games with one person?


AppleSpongeCake chapter 3 . 10/23/2015

AppleSpongeCake chapter 2 . 10/23/2015



I hope you rot in Hell for what you did to my baby.
Kas3y chapter 14 . 10/9/2014
I know it been a lil while that you wrote this but can u PLZ either do a alternate ending where Hiccup does die, either from the stab to the heart or on the boat with Stoick. Or a sequel. Either would be great. I loved this story either way. It had a great plot and the writing was perfect. So I will be reading any and properly all of ur HTTYD fan fictions. Keep up the GREAT work :D

P.S. I thought when we first met the mystery dragon u were gonna do it POV. But u didn't :P If u did, that woulda been cool, otherwise fantastic.
LishaBaggins chapter 8 . 7/14/2014
Great chapter loved it
I have read it about 10 times cause it is so good
You have a real talent in writing
Kikitiki chapter 14 . 3/12/2014
I love your writing style. And this story was really beautiful.
But it felt way too short. like WAAAYYYYY too short.
It wasn't long enough to make a strong emotional connection to hiccup when the dragon died.
And I don't think there was enough description when it came to how they hurt hiccup, in the end he is having these memories about his torture that we never read about. I'm sure you did it for effect (and it was a beautiful effect) but from what you wrote when he was imprisoned, it never happened. He never mentioned getting beaten in his cell, only a few whips. I think you should have added more to the story on that kind of stuff :O
Other wise, It was a beautiful story!
And you're really good at describing action! A lot of people have a hard time with that.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/18/2014
Oh my... It's over? B-but it can't be, over!

That was the most touching story ever, I cried and that's saying something I hardly ever cry for anything.

I am actually clapping right now and about to start bawling,
Thank you, just...

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