|Reviews for A Clean Slate|
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 11 . 3/11
Okay, Edward honestly was his own version of controlling here too, but I laughed so hard at how he played Jake and used Bella's phone to get her off. Yeah, I'm sure Jake will find a way to hurt Bella for what Edward did, but for now I'm satisfied with that.
It sounds like Edward may be right and Jake may finally be realizing he's losing Bella, so he may use whatever he has to keep her. I hope Jake does treat their daughter better, but his past is no excuse for him not knowing right and wrong where Bella is concerned. He wasn't raised in a vacuum. He had to have seen loving couples around him and if he truly loved Bella, he must have seen how hurt she was by the name calling and his infidelity. Bella does deserve better. I hope she will eventually reach out to Jacob and demand he treat her better because their daughter needs him.
| sherylb chapter 20 . 3/11
That douchebag Jake has caused so much damage to Bella.
| Roslyn1213 chapter 1 . 3/10
I like this a lot so far!
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 10 . 3/10
I initially thought Bella gasped because she realized he hadn't used a condom (he really should have told her), but it was a nice surprise to see Edward had his own set of body image issues and insecurities. It was sad to hear how his previous girlfriends treated him like a freak due to his size and being uncircumcised, but I loved how Bella told him it was a fantasy of hers and reassured him how much she enjoyed sex with him.
I was relieved to know Bella's daughter was Corrine and not Haley. Whew! That would have been really awkward. I am glad Edward's going to meet her and Bella's mother. I also wonder why Bella refers to her as "my" daughter. Isn't Jake Corrine's dad?
Speaking of Jake, I thought Bella said she laid down some new boundaries with him, but she's still allowing him to be a contentious part of her relationship with Edward. Edward was right. Bella should have ended that call, although I didn't like that he hung up the phone for her. She was with Edward and he should expect her ex to take a back seat in their time together, unless it's an emergency. I hope Bella realizes that before it's too late.
Great chapter! Thanks!
| EdwardsKitten chapter 20 . 3/9
It would be really difficult to believe that a man like this existed.
| pixiekat7 chapter 20 . 3/8
I've been epic fail in the reviewing department & I'm sorry for that. But I want you to know that I adore this story & the way that it's blossoming. I know Bella has her doubt (thanks to that asshat, Jake), but she's most definitely getting there. I'm looking forward to her epiphany & her (Edward & Cori) getting their well deserved HEA.
Thanks so much.
| chartwilightmom chapter 20 . 3/8
so emotional and passionate between these two
bella needs to stop fighting him, give in and let him love her and cori
she could finally have what she wants, and needs
lovely, i can feel her struggle and his, keep it coming when you can!
| JXB Addicted chapter 20 . 3/8
That was great! What year us Edward in? I hope u feel better! TTFN! JXB ;-}
| Mom23xx chapter 20 . 3/8
Her walls are very slowly crumbling.
| Court0624 chapter 20 . 3/8
| Taylor9901 chapter 20 . 3/7
I can't wait for more. I love it.
| NeeNee246 chapter 20 . 3/7
This is really great! I love this story! :)
| debslmac chapter 20 . 3/7
| Vivi H88 chapter 20 . 3/7
Great chapter :)
| Judyblue95 chapter 20 . 3/6
Her insecurity is very deep. What will it take for her to allow herself to believe that he is for real? I can truly relate to how she feels, I can. I love how he is with Cori. He's right. He is a big kid that can play with her on her level...
I hope you feel better soon and that your trip is all you hope for...