|Reviews for Snap Judgment|
| Sailor Taichichi Vegeta chapter 16 . 2/3
Much as I'd welcome a guy like Ivan dropping in for a visit... I gotta remember to keep my basement secure. (Gonna take his booze, too? Well, he's complete scum anyway, so whatever.)
Aaaaah, broken legs! I half-expected Ivan to shove Callaghan's head through the glass, but his way is quicker. Good job, remembering how he'd totally bribe his way out of trouble if left alive.
...He won't be missed. Yes Ivan, it may be a little sad, but consider the alternative! Think of the haters, think of how you actually got to slam this sicko's head into a wall!
I can see Gilbert watching Maury. I bet he watches for the shouting matches, and to marvel at the occasional guest named "Pancake" or "Que."
The eavesdropping part was awesome. Then again, Ivan was all loud and obvious, so it wasn't really eavesdropping.
Hunter green and burgundy? Aren't those the colors in Freddy's sweater? Oh well, everything at Ivan's place sounds nice. EVERYTHING. XD
Aww, Gilbert has his family back! I like the use of "subtitles."
I have no idea why I took so long to come back here and review this last chapter. You always do such good work.
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/17/2013
God damn. This is one of the best I have had the joy of reading.
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| animekitten03 chapter 16 . 4/29/2013
That was the most beautiful story I've ever read. The writing was perfect, I'm looking to more stories like this in the future. You have a new fan!
| Hibrovi chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
I love this fic ;; it's so beautiful
| TiggitNeko chapter 16 . 4/21/2013
That was epically epically amazingly beautiful XD :3
| MirthfulMurder21 chapter 16 . 4/11/2013
I finished it! Man, this was one of the best fics that I've ever had the privilege to read :) I loved all of it. It was the perfect combination of drama, angst, romance, and humor. I really liked Gilbert and Ivan's nicknames for eachother, it's just so darn cute! It's beautifully written, and it has the perfect ending. This one's going in my favorites! Great job.
| MirthfulMurder21 chapter 11 . 4/10/2013
Only five more chapters to go T.T but I can't stay awake. It's 2:35 in the am, on a week day. I vow to you that I shall finish reading this amazing story tomorrow... or, later today I guess :)
| MirthfulMurder21 chapter 6 . 4/10/2013
Yay, Alfred! Okay, next chapter :3
| MirthfulMurder21 chapter 5 . 4/10/2013
I just started reading this story, and it is sooo good. I just wanted to leave a little review about the part of this chapter when Ivan imagined himself taking pictures of Callaghan's body outlined in chalk. It was so... Ivan. Great job! I can tell already that I'm going to be up all night reading this :)
| moonost chapter 16 . 4/8/2013
Ahh, thank you for writing this story, it's been such a joy to follow Ivan and Gilbert from when Ivan found the pictures of Gilbert in that magazine, then abused and broken, to what their relationship now is... He's damn lucky Ivan got involved.
| Huntershivers chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
So... now it is over. I can't say I don't like the end - because I really, really, REALLY LOVE the end!
But I am quite sure you can imagine I am a little bit sad, that I won't get new chapters now... T_T (on the other hand I can now finally start to finish the other story wich I still have to read till the end, but... no RusPrus... T_T )
I really like how you navigated arount your problem with the invisible OC. It was a little bit dissatisfying because this way we only got a glimpse of his agony in that moment, he realised what he would have to go through now and decided to end it by himself, but... It was really fine, I like how it turned out and I am pretty sure it was the best way... for Ivans sake. And I am very happy that you really changed the plan of murder. After reading the whole chapter, it would have been so awkward to read a murder scene, Ivan getting away with it and then have this fluffy ending.
So... you rock and did an awesome job! X3
The flashback was something I thought was quite normal for a victim of mobbing. Since I had these feelings in school too! Not to the extend of killing but... well I sometimes wished I could just hit these faces very hard until something breaks, so... I can perfectly relate to Ivan at this point. I think it is quite normal for someone in his position. I'm just still amazed that they all had the courage to bully such a big guy like him! X'D I guess if he only once had fought back it would have stopped. for it helpd quite a lot when I was in that position. Didn'T even got the chance to actually hurt that girl, but... well our teacher was still in the room I ticked in the middle of math lesson, grabbed her hair and tried my best to fight her back. Teacher gave both of us quite a speech - though the one I got was quite half heartedly. I just knew deep inside he admired that I fought back. X'D But ever since then no one dared to really bully any further. one has to really scare just one of them and it is over. Or... it WAS like that. Nower days I would not dare to say it would go like that. Some children are so extremely agressive in these days...
Buuuut let's go on. I really liked Alfred admitting that he is to blame for what happened, too! I don't know, somehow I have the feeling that they are quite good friends and Ivan must have told him why he quitted at his studies. For sure not in detail but I can not imagine Ivan actually lying into Alfreds face, especially if he knows his nature in general.
I won't go into detail about the people in the cellar or I'll have to throw up, because my imagination is too good. It is pretty obvious what he did to all of them since they are scared to death. *growls inwardly*
So... I'll go on. Since Francis is visiting in this chapter I'll have to thank you for making him so lovable in this story. I am normally no fan of him but you managed to push him up that imaginary ladder of mine so I am reaaaaallly fond of him right now. In a 'bro'-way at least. I don't think I will ever stop disliking his way of flirting. X'D
The scene afterwards is so sweet. Ivan just being... his sweet fluffy loving self and everyone watches in awe and feels as if watching a love-movie. Since I am quite neutral to these scenes I couldn't stop laughing. Especially as Gilbert said that it would suck to be Steven right now. god I giggled a lot...
I like how you solved this little 'problem' if Gilbert should know what has happened or not. Since he is really clever - and Ivan was so terribly easy to see through - I figured he would know sooner or later and I liked how he just did not care to ask. Just as if he knew he would not like the answer and just did not want to have any feelings of regret, because of that asshole.
Well... the epilog. I liked this playful behaviour in bed... so adorable! X3 Although I like the hard ways too, but in this story I so much prefer them being fluffy in the foreplay. And I envy each and everyone who is albe to hear wolves when going to sleep... I love these animals and it is rare for them to howl in the zoo. Though I heared them once and was litterally crying out of joy, so... I can not relate to them in this part, since I adore these creatures to no end.
The very very end was an overkill. from having no one except for an abusive boyfriend and a adorable dog to gaining two families was really positive but it made me collapse a bit from the feels. *coughs*
so... a wonderful fanfiction of yours, which I am sure won't find a rival that easily.
*gives lots of love and cuddles to you and this story*
| SweetHatredHowILoveThee chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
Now that this is over, I have no idea what to do with my life.
| itschinatown chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
The last bit of the chapter was so fluffy and good-feeling I'm satisfied for at least a week, thank you for writing this (Y)