|Reviews for Instrumental|
| mystery chapter 5 . 1/5
really cool writing skills..
keep it up...
| DoublePaws chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
Wow! This is a great story! I like so can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
Good job on the chapter but don't just leave us hanging. Your work has managed to impress me and that doesn't happen very often. I am a critic who looks at this site regularly just to see who the good writers are. Trust me you are near the top of that list. Try not to keep all of that raw writersness bottled up and show us what you can do. I look forward to your next update.
| Delph1762 chapter 5 . 9/5/2013
Oh yeah !
Premièrement, je suis française, j'espère que tu pourras traduire ;)
Cela fait un moment que je lis ta fiction, mais là je suis OBLIGÉE de laisser une review ! C'est quoi cette fin ? Tu nous laisses là ? On ne sait pas ce qui se passe ! On ne sait pas ce qu'il s'est passé ! On ne sait pas ce qu'il se passera ! :O
Sinon, I love it ! :D Jack et Hiccup sont si mignons ! *o* Même si pour l'instant, Hiccup ose rien du tout et que Jack se contrôle encore xp
| Iron eagle chapter 5 . 8/29/2013
Best of luck with highschool. Also great story and I hope to see more in the near future.
| StarryNight359 chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
Well, Jack and Hiccup are still cute, the fluffiness is adorable and Pitch is still an a-hole. I think that about sums this chapter up nicely. Ooh, but I also enjoyed the teasing on Astrid's part - hilarious! :D
I do that to my friends too. They did warn me about what they would do once the situation is reversed. Maybe I shouldn't do that anymore lol
| shadow visor chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
mmmmm loved. please update soon!
| Aroski156 chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
OMG! I can't wait to see what happens! Please update as soon as possible!
| Honey beeez chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
You must be a Skillet fan... I LOVE YOU ALREADY
Pitch is so freaking creepy, but I can understand... in a way... I guess... no not really, never mind.
Really awesome, nothing else I can say, but awesome
| StarryNight359 chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
aww those two are so cute :3
They haven't kissed yet have they?
And I hope you're feeling better? I've gone through a not so great time myself recently, but it'll get better. Concentrate on the positive things in your life, it really helps :)
| Honey beeez chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
I absolutely love this! That song was SOOOOO sweet, and I could practically hear Jacks voice sing the melody! I dong care if there's another fanfic out there just like this one, THIS is the only one I'll read. I love it, love it, love it! Thanks for writing this! Write more! :)
| starhunter9147 chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
LOve it keep going :3
| hijack fangirl chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
This was just AMAZING! I love this sooooooo MUCH! I cant WAIT for the next update! I will be checking EVERYDAY to see if it has been updated, keep up the good work! 3
| raven chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
I love love love this story the way jack loves hiccup is just to cute to ignore! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
| KarimaCreative chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
Your a really good writer hope you update soon