Reviews for My Shiny Metal Immortal
XxXxLoveandKissesxXxX chapter 1 . 2/4
OMG lol XD
xRawrzzxDx chapter 12 . 6/25/2014
Spelling needs a lot of fixing, can't really understand.
Nintendo Nincompoop chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Amg!1! Dis iz de bestest story in de entire world!1!11! U r truly awesome n kewl!1! (I do t type like this normally, just thought it'd suit the occasion. Just a heads-up here. :3)
Torotyrannus15 chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Wow. I'm only a ch 2 and this is fullah shyte! The ONLY way an author as great as you could write a fic with this much horse shit in it is on purpose. I will NOT be reading the real thing of this, because it will clearly have far more shit of every variety. A good author writes a fucked story. That really sounds like it should've happened at some point in the past.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Can someone hold me? I'm scared...
Aladara1111 chapter 16 . 4/4/2013
LOL XD This is awesome, and hilarious!
Nikolkol chapter 16 . 3/27/2013
I am totally eating this story up. All in favor for sequels ?
TheQuietScreams chapter 40 . 3/17/2013
xD This is pure gold!
ThanosofTitan chapter 36 . 3/16/2013
Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 11 . 3/2/2013
"Masticate" means "to slobber." "MASTURBATE" means... well you know.

So Zoidberg was slobbering while she bathed... seems like a Zoidberg-ish thing to do.
Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 10 . 3/2/2013
"He started to cry wisely". There is just too much stuff wrong with that sentence.

"A concerted voice". I dunno about you, but it sounds to me like Amy is constipated?
Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 9 . 3/2/2013
Now everyone's goffic.

Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 8 . 3/2/2013
Virility: "the state of being manly; many character, vigor, or spirit; masculinity."

So when Cobaltsaid she lost her virility to Bender, she meant that she used to be a man and Bender turned her into a woman.

Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 7 . 3/2/2013
Um, so now she thinks Bender was in a relationship with VampFry?

Wow. This girl needs help.
Naddalemur4realzdistime chapter 6 . 3/2/2013
Why does Fry like the taste of human blood!? WTF?

I luv le story! I read My Immortal,.and I still have no idea why it was named My Immorta.
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