|Reviews for One Day|
| kymbersmith90 chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
It was so good to see this update in my box. Take your time, real life always comes first. I will still be here no matter how long it takes you to update.
As soon as Edward noticed that passport on the floor in front of his seat I knew who it would belong to. I am just glad he picked it up because I could imagine Bella freaking out when their plane touched down and she realised she had lost it. I don’t blame him for doing a little snooping while he was at it. I think anyone would have in that position, if only to return the identification to the rightful owner.
I wonder why Bella’s date of birth feels like such a huge punch to the gut for Edward? I am guessing the age gap between the two of them is more than he feels comfortable with. It’s either that or he feels like she has mislead him about her age. That would explain why he went in search of her instead of waiting for her to come to him.
In a way, I am glad Edward was there for Bella when she came out of the lavatory. I cannot imagine how tough flying must be for her with claustrophobia. I never thought I suffered from it but I was recently put into an MRI scanner and that really freaked me out. It seems like Bella’s little trip also served as a form of distraction for Edward. He was more concerned about her wellbeing than what he found out from her passport.
When Edward made it back to their seats to find Bella’s head in her hands I thought she had realised she had lost her passport. I am glad that she was just embarrassed about her little stumble because I was hoping to put off the age conversation for as long as possible. I guess that wasn’t really possible when Bella mentioned family name and Edward’s mind immediately sprang to her full name, which he discovered from the passport.
Aww, how sweet was Edward when he said he would have waited with Bella in Customs if she had have left her passport behind. I don’t think anything he has read inside that booklet will have much of an effect on him. To me, it sounds like he is head-over-heels for her.
I wasn’t expecting their conversation to lead to Bella finding out a little more about Edward but I am glad it did. Not only is it fair for him to share the information he found out about Bella, about himself, but I think he should have showed her his passport photo too. Lol. At least Bella seemed to enjoy what she thought Edward’s full name was as much as he enjoyed learning hers. These two really are stupidly crazy for each other.
I loved seeing them laughing together at the end of this chapter. I only hope we see more of it before they have to separate when their flight touches down. Maybe by then they will feel comfortable enough to exchange numbers with each other.
| Nissa-Cullen chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
So what was the big deal about her birthday? What is he wondering about there? How weird that they end up sitting next to each other both going home and from the same town. I can't wait to see how things turn out for them. Hopefully Mike won't be in the picture for long.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
I hate he loved another girl than Bella and wanted to marry her. Hate it.
| CrackedFic chapter 5 . 9/12/2013
So glad to see you updated. Keep it going. These two are cute together.
| LaPumuckl chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
I thought that maybe she would freak out some more about him "steeling" her passport. But I'm glad it only helped them to open up some more:)
| Eternally Addicted chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
Hmmm I get the feeling Bella's birthday is the same as the day Edward's mother died.
| MazzyStarla chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
So excited to see this in my inbox. Love as always.
| kreads chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
I love this. I love that Edward is different and not perfect and willing to be honest with Bella. Also, I appreciate the sides of his character that have been shown through his backstory. Obviously he is very complex, and I look forward to reading more about his character development.
| Tinsley Warren chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
Glad they're getting to know each other!
| muffinmom chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
Liked the chapter and their interactions, though I'm confused about why Edward felt punched in the gut after looking at her passport?
Hey RL is what it is, thx for writing despite your RL craziness. Appreciate any and all chapters whenever you share them!
| luvyateamedward chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
Thanks for the update! Great chapter! I wonder what it is he found on the passport. Did she lie about her age? I don't remember if she said how old she was. I'd have to go reread.
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
I think you did a great job with Edward's back story. Another great chapter, can't wait till the update. Keep up the good work. ;)
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
I have a feeling that Edward will have a hand in some new found freedom for Bella. ;)
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
I like how relaxed they are with each other, just hope it stays this way. ;)
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Sounds good, can't wait to see where this is going. Great start. ;)