Reviews for Better Than the Movies
guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
i don't usually like too much smut, and i very much don't usually ship these two characters, but oh my god. something about this fanfic is just sweet and raw and it worked against all odds for me. i think a very common mistake with smut fics is that they lose the story by being lazy and just slapping down Porn without Plot, without trying to balance the sex with a story, and sweetness and humor and being realistic. Sometimes they (the author) just take all of the passion out of the exchange by trying too hard to make it animalistic and vulgar. they try so hard to make it a "fuck" and not "making love" that they end up making it disgusting and unrelatable. I definitely applaud you as an author because you are one of the few authors i have seen that was able to get things this dirty while still leaving me interested and happy as a reader. Keep up the good work. I was very impressed.
Kaishou chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
O.O Wow. Just... bravo! That was outstanding. Simply delicious.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
nice story :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Funny, smexy, and holy shit I nearly came just reading this
Ttrace chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This was funny. Good fanf...
crownymars chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
really sweet and sexy
She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Funny! I like this bare-faced take on a love scene. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
that was so wild dude
ShEiLdEd-WiNgS chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
perfect one-shot :)
Animeloves001 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Ahhh! That was sooo good! Felt like how a relationship between those two would be! And I love that you were inspired by that episode of Friends (love that show...always will). Loved this :) Very well written too, and passionate.