Reviews for A Fine Line to Cross
Lauren Leppik chapter 11 . 11/3/2016
Well I don't feel dead inside at all... This story actually hurt my heart so much, I had to take a reading break then come back because I couldn't handle the angst. Well done on writing such an emotionally provoking and well thought out novel!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/11/2016
Fab story loved the ending
marizpe chapter 11 . 4/7/2016
In loved your story. I dont know if you are still writing or still be part of FF. But I wanted to tell you that I enjoy reading your story.
You made me cry a lot, when Katniss was in rhe cementary talking with Prim.
You made me hated Peeta for being and idiot and sleep with Jo.
But at the end, the true love wins! :)
Thanks for sharing this story.
gazpacho14 chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
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insidejokepartyof1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Ok so I spent the last couple of days reading this story, and I enjoyed the story even though i thought it was completely fucked up that peeta slept with johanna to try and take his mind off of katniss and vice a versa with katniss and darius. Also i was a little confused on some of the timeline, did i read that right that peeta had only stopped drinking 2 and a half months before katniss came back for beetee's retirement party? Anyways i really liked this story even though the ending seemed a little rushed to me.
barangurte chapter 11 . 11/27/2015
Loved it!
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Katniss should have paid more attention. Peeta did hint about a PhD, that plus the Gold card discount for University Emloyees. xD

She can't blame him, he did try to warn her after all. xD

This looks like a really fun read. xD
LiveWriteReadLove.Lit.Everlark chapter 11 . 1/23/2015
I loved this story so much! And I lived the ending. So happy to see they got their always :) After the both had their ups and downs :) Truly loved this
xerxia31 chapter 11 . 1/21/2015
I feel like it's strange to leave a review on a story that was completed over a year ago, but I'm compelled to tell you how much I enjoyed this, how frequently I've come back to re-read it. I can't help hoping that you revisit this universe at some point, maybe in the form of one-shots. The characters are so rich, coupled with your excellent research and snappy dialogue, it'd be a treat to read more...
Gillian Deverone chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
I really like it. Can't wait to read subsequent chapters.
Mscallo chapter 11 . 11/10/2014
Great story. I loved every minute of it. Real life Peeta and Katniss are fun to read. You did a great job on everything. Thank You
Lulubelle77 chapter 11 . 10/23/2014
Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a brilliant story. I loved it and couldn't put it down. You are a very talented writer and I hope you write more lengthy stories such as this. PLEASE!
Extacy925 chapter 11 . 9/7/2014
That was so cute I loved it.
JessWheel chapter 11 . 6/15/2014
Just read this in a day... omg, amazing! You're such a great writer! Any chance of a Gadge outtake coming from this? Even just a one shot? :D I was so in love with them in this story and found myself wanting to know more about how Gale helped Madge deal with her attack and also if they ended up together! 3
HGGal chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
I would love to see an update/ sequel to this story too!
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