Reviews for Situation at Portland Hospital
Mr. Julio chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
You need to but some spaces in.
Catalina87 chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Hey I really liked your story a lot! Have you ever thought about making a sequel or another one shot? The paragraphing could have used a little work though. I liked the detail you went into at the very end of the fic. I would definetly love to read another one! Great work!
Maverick Point chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
You have a talent for writing action. I like the indirect background you gave the characters, and the way you portrayed the main character was awesome. I hope to see more from you. Too bad your formatting screwed up. It was really tough to read. Maybe you should try uploading again. But otherwise, Kudos.
InsaneWithAnger1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2002
You need to make more stuff like this because this is pure good stuff
SouthParkUniverse chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
I want much more. Maybe Staunton island... F.B.I...
theexpert31 chapter 1 . 8/12/2002
pretty good. So those what the people were thinking when I killed them
the m0nk chapter 1 . 8/2/2002
the formatting got messed up so it's sorta tedious to read.