|Reviews for Judgement: Modern Human Version - Part I|
| circa1994 chapter 26 . 1/25/2016
Why does Victor Charlie have a Makarov PM and why does he empty the entire eight plus one shot SEMI-AUTO pistol into the sky? A Tokarev TT-33 would be a more historical accurate weapon for the VC.
| circa1994 chapter 12 . 1/25/2016
What is the pridelands primary infantry rifle? I see both the m14 and various configurations of the m16.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 29 . 1/13/2014
Ah classic Bronno. Never change mate, never change.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 28 . 1/13/2014
Damn... that last part came out of nowhere. Hope whoever did it gets theirs.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 27 . 1/13/2014
This was tragic. Not much else to say apart from its awesome.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 25 . 12/2/2013
Well, Ahadi going to Germany on a rescue mission seems a bit...doomed to failure but sounds too badass not to have happened.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 24 . 12/2/2013
Damn, how is Scar going to slip out of a court martial.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 22 . 11/27/2013
Seemed a bit strange that so few people are so over represented but that was how it was in the original and it does add in that personal touch to Scar's defeat.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 20 . 10/26/2013
That must have been hard for you to write.
The game and the murder were both really intense and well done. Fantastic work!
Oh yeah, the King is dead. Long live the King!
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 19 . 10/26/2013
I hope he lives through this one, be a shame for him to die in two universes. Always did like Gaz and Wallcroft was good when he was around.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 18 . 10/26/2013
Gaz Wallcroft? That's just awesome. It isn't the only awesome thing by far. This was brilliantly done captures the spirit of the original but you made it your own.
Also Hisses! Yes.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 16 . 10/20/2013
Well...fuck. That was really well done.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
Cliff hangers are evil. Fun, but evil.
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 12 . 10/19/2013
| Emerald dreamer96 chapter 11 . 10/19/2013
Heckler! I was a bit confused about the name until I realised who's son he was. Love how your merging the universes.
They sent a coma patient into a warzone to do army service? Strange but I guess its hard to say no to a King. I guess the same holds true for Mufasa, Zira and Sarafina such short notice though and no training... If this is standard the Pridelands Royal army and Marines are going to be getting their asses kicked.
On the other hand. Nam Bitch! Great chapter.