Reviews for Dawn's Swift Force
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
I liked this, certainly an interesting look into what love represents for these characters.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
question.. who was the figure in he sea? hazel? im confused .. but GREAT fanfic!
hobbitkisses chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I don't even know what to say. This is just... Pure beauty written down. Funny, sad, cute, just lovely. I truly love this. Can you marry a story?
Lyza K chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I would LOVE Hazel's POV! :D
This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
Of COURSE you should continue writing Lazel!
This wasn't crappy at all - in fact, it was the best Lazel I've read in weeks! I think Leo was pretty much in character too. :)
Valouw chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
It was no OOC, and you respect Leo's character very well. And Aphrodite's too !
And you HAVE to continue writing Lazel ;);)
Then, in favorite story and author alert. :)
(Sorry for my english, it's not my native language)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
like, seriously.
CoffeeQueenDemigod chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
OWW! Beautiful! w loved it! Love the poetry (though I don't usually like it much) most of the time I stick with William but this is just perfect! I loved it! Bravo!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
You gotta keep writing Lazel! I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Wow That was so sweet and sentimental. I love it.
LOVE IT chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
WHAT?! WHY exactly does this not have more reviews? This is so beautiful! I love this story, and it only makes me love Lazel more. Gosh, I hate it when people don't review good stories and yet they review the cliche, poorly written stories that seem as if they were written in gibberish!

Good job! PLEASE make more! :)