Reviews for Orange Spark and Black Wings of Konoha
Guest chapter 2 . 10/13
Please continue
ErenYeager77051 chapter 2 . 9/15
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Please continue this story. It's awesome!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/12
Even if it was a bit late it was very enjoyable so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck!
Ps:would Aldura be able to transform certIn parts for her body for example the tail. Probbly not a good idea because i think I would mess up Aldura abilities so just forget it but just as a maby when her eyes change her voice gets stronger and her senses get stronger too. Any way good luck
ShadowImageComics chapter 2 . 5/10
Okay interesting story you have here. I loved to see a third chapter of it.
Madgormley chapter 2 . 4/18
excellent story please continue
narmulti chapter 2 . 1/11
Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON
God-ShadowEx100 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Wow what a pathetic queer ass konoha cock sucking fanboy you are fucking pathetic child.
Xilonax Shiverflame chapter 2 . 10/25/2014
More please? This is relative to my interests.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
please update soon
BlackEclipsNightFang chapter 2 . 4/28/2014
can't weight for more to read
coduss chapter 2 . 1/18/2014
good story, needs an update!
Dracoessa chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
Damn that uke licker.
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Why did you make Kakashi a Naruto-hater? I don't mind, but I am curious.
Bladre MKT chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
not bad... im not a fan of kakashi-bash sadly but other than that this looks promising, specially with some decent work in that new release yer showin there...
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