Reviews for Orange Spark and Black Wings of Konoha
zerozeno chapter 4 . 8/17
Please for the love of God don't let Sasuke learn any of the shouts
arinasution5 chapter 4 . 8/12
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Multipule-Characters1-Acct chapter 4 . 7/7
Keep people from joining the Akatsuki and have them on your side, or at least out of the way.
The Question chapter 4 . 6/15
If it is Hidan that Gato hired, how will the battle go on the bridge? Will Naruto fall victim to Hidan's jutsu and Aldura will get SO angry she will transform into her dragon form to beat Hidan and then use healing magic on Naruto to save him, AND Haku and Zabuza will survive the battle?
NaruFuu Forever chapter 4 . 6/15
I saw in the pairings that Naruto would be paired with Aldura and maybe someone else. Could the other girl please be Fuu, the Seven Tails' Jinchuuriki, please? They are both kindred spirits that belong together. PLEASE at least consider her.
Skyrim Lover chapter 4 . 6/15
This is so awesome! I really can't wait for more of this story.
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29
:3 cool
Aluriea chapter 4 . 5/27
Ohhhh Hidan is one of my fav Akatsuki chars, I am enjoying the story quite alot and cant wait to see what happens next so keep up the awsome work.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21
Nice chapter make Haku the second girl in his pairing
edboy4926 chapter 4 . 5/20
Good story
Keep on going
T-B-R chapter 4 . 5/19
hah, it would take Sasuke years to even get one shout down pat.
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