|Reviews for Kimberley Diamond|
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Wow, that was a terrible trip,those poor girls endured! But loved Edward from the start, so confident that she was his! Hehe
| harleys chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
I'd love to see this continued! Great job!
| tff000 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
| MalloryKnoxx chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I absolutely loved this. You paint a vivid picture, and this Edward is funny and bold and cocky and hot...I wish there was more.
| Winchester Baby chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Sooo cute! I loved it. :)
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I loved it poor bella had to loose most of her things and be taken against her will but it all led to Edward where she is ment to be thank you I wish there was more
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
| AlexJade chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
what an unusual one-shot! I loved it.
How primitive, posessive acts of "some" men can excite us so much I will never know.
| terriberry chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
One of my favorites from this contest! Really really good. Congratulations, and I hope you decide to expand it!
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I absolutely adored this story! A worthy winner!
| TheRugbymom chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
| sri ffn chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
And you my dear own me with your awesome writing skills.
| youngandmature chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I don't understand why Bella consented to Jacob and with anal sex? Wasn't that relatively taboo back then?
And when she knew she was to be wed, she essentially cheated!?
| JinnyJenny chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Wow! Just Wow! For a one shot it I feel like I just read a complete story! I was completely there with Bella as she told her tale and I felt her fear, her courage, her outrage, the heat of Africa, the heartbreaking loss of all her unfortunate traveling companions, then meeting her would be husbands. Her trip was gritty and dire and when she finally arrived at the Cullen house I was relieved because atleast Carlisle would be a good guy. I loved the competition and I loved possessive Edward! He was perfect mix of sweetness, romance, she's mine and I gotta have her now! Wow just Wow!
| KatHat chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
What a horrible atrocious boat trip for those ladies!
Love this o/s and a very possessive Edward! And a very vocal Bella!
Congrats on your win!