|Reviews for 50 minutes of Grey|
| luvfordelena chapter 12 . 2/22
i really hope you update soon, i really love this story.
| pixxiestrength chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I love this, it was very entertaining, although I feel that this seems to be too soon for John o talk to Christian about the relationship that him and Anastasia have, after all, they only had sex once at this point. I feel he doesn't need to say the long paragraph about questions and homework, could be shorter.
I also had a very little image in my mind of how you envisioned this to be, and that was from reading the books themselves. Elaborate on detail and imagery.
Lastly, I feel that Christians personality is very mirrored to Anas' personality in the books, change it up and make it your own or try to act more 50 shades, less Anastasia.
| robyn odei-ntiri chapter 12 . 10/8/2013
New reader to your story..I love it...These talks are so enlighting.I love Christian and 't wait for the next chapter
| CSC1028 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Loved this exploration of Christian's point of view! Looking forward to reading more!
| writerpanda chapter 12 . 7/26/2013
I need another chapter pleaseeeee!
| k4writer chapter 12 . 7/20/2013
This has been a lot of fun to read. Really like the point of view and the glimpse of Christian's struggles. Looking forward to more! Great writing! Great story!
| writerpanda chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
Oh my god, I love how amazing is the idea of making fanfiction of 50 shades from this point of view!
I'm just in love with it. Thank you for writing :3
| jeangb chapter 12 . 7/14/2013
Well Ihave read all this at one sitting and find it very insightful. I do hope you are going to have "more" sessions as we need to cover CG's reaction to the pregnancy and the prospect of fatherhood, his fears, reticence, his control slipping . most all outright panic. Keep writing kid this is great.
| marabones74 chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Great job as usual. Just wish the chapters weren't so short.
| Foggynights chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
I like you take on CG sessions with Flynn ! I am looking forward to your next update!
| Roadrunner3x chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
I hope this isn't the end of this story. I need more!
| Loccitane chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
You are a very talented writer ! I am enjoying this story and the originality of the concept ! I love Flynn 's insight and explanation of Christian' s feelIngs, thoughts and concerns and on relationships in general ! I love that Christian cares enough about Ana to really dig into all their confrontations with Flynn. Cannot wait for your next chapter!
| Roadrunner3x chapter 4 . 7/8/2013
I just started reading this story and I really like it!
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/8/2013
Wow, CG is so over wrought with Ana safe wording. Thats wonderful, he is truly changing, this is really good. Nice story. Hope you update soon.
| Kim's Mum chapter 12 . 7/8/2013
I loved how christian tries to convince himself it is a good day, I do that sometimes too.