|Reviews for Adrift - Floatation Device|
| OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 15 . 7/14
When I first started reading your stories with Christy, I really enjoyed them. It was the first time I had ever read and actually liked an OC before. Now I feel like she has become a bit stale to read? I'm not sure if stale is the best word to describe what I'm trying to convey, but she never changes much. She has the same personality and mannerisms in each story. I know you can't really change them, but it's always more of the same. Maybe overexposed is a good word for her? English is hard. Another thing about stories with her are the romance aspects. With each new story the romance feels more hollow than the last. It's not that they're written poorly, it's just a bit ridiculous how she does. She goes to new world and finds someone she'll love forever every time. It just seems ridiculous. As for this story. The romance between Christy and Bella was super adorable. I like what you did with Bella and the dynamic between the merged coven. I did dislike your future inclusion of Tanya into their relationship. It was built upon poorly and most of Tanya's affection seemed to happen off screen. The part where Tanya got her leg ripped off by Edward seemed like a very convenient way for her and Bella to become closer. In my opinion Tanya's part feels tacked on.
| T chapter 18 . 7/12
Great story... really enjoyed it :D
| Kage and Imouto chapter 18 . 6/28
Ending could have been a, little better, but other than that it was a fantastic story. Good job
| PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 5/31
Considering that Christy's crimes happened in another reality, then the X-men and the Government had no legal way to arrest her.
| Slytherson chapter 18 . 5/18
can u imagine if u were a self insert as bella dealing with that cray cray nutso edward or or if u were bella's self inserted twin sister who might have edwards attention as well with bella but your not into supernatural drama not on any team ed or team wolf or or or
if u had been reborn with bella sharing a leg together as simmes twins like either youd have a shared leg or a shared stomach or organ like um if u ever have watch american horror story freak show it has simmees twins in it and well would be hard to be born sharing body parts with bella swan who ends up in a mess of stalker vampires and gets turned on by that and edward thinks all girls and some boys like him but really he is just a immortal child eww like no i so would want any cullen trouble unless it was emment or jasper or their father mr dr purrrr
u dont wont to fall for any edward or jacob like eww no but maybe the vampires might be interested in talking with the girls but not sure how that would turn out shiver trapped in that world is one thing but trapped in the love triangle drama shit side by side with bella as simmees twin no no nooooooooooo
emment would be nice so would jasper but edward might be just like how you made him in the fic and like in the original book movie series which is a total ass anyways i so enjoyed this thank u for sharing this on here
| Slytherson chapter 4 . 5/18
what about becoming a vampire farmer with cows chickens ducks goats sheep u could drain the blood into a barral and cut the meat to sell or donate to food drives?
but over all so far i like this story i to never liked the cullen killing thoses types of animals well i dont mind the mountain lions cause those are a lot out there more than bears bears have a much harder time finding food finding places to live etc
| merniizztat chapter 18 . 5/11
| natcityjp chapter 18 . 4/15
Thank you for finishing this. I enjoyed reading from start to finish.
| Ryo Oh Ki7 chapter 18 . 3/27
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/19
Perfect ending to a phenominal story.
| Queenyyy chapter 18 . 3/19
One of my favourite stories!
(And one of the few where i agreed with the non canon death of a main character, thank you for this)
| Gryphon Aerie chapter 18 . 3/19
Of all the stories on this site, for some reason this one always gets me in a good mood when I'm feeling down, and it has been a constant go-to favorite for my best friend and I since I stumbled across your work around half a year ago.
Thank you so much for writing the epilogue.
| Umbrardor chapter 18 . 3/19
Satisfying ending. I love it when lesbians win.
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/19
Amazing story! Looved it
| WolfbrotherTitan chapter 18 . 3/17
I liked the last ending, but this one has more permanence to it, and in spite of it hurting Esme and Carlisle, this seems s more fitting ending. I will say it's odd that if Edward were going to do that that he'd wait until it was so close to the time they were planning to turn Bella anyway, but, again, that fits with the Edward of this story, until that time he might have still held out some hope that Bella would change her mind...and he's just stupid enough to think that the Volturi can be manipulated, which also follows Edward's personality. Like I said before, the only bad thing here is how it affected Esme and Carlisle, neither deserved to go through that, but, as heartless as it may be to say, they're basically immortal, they'll get over it.
In addition I just wanted to add that I've loved your Christy stories from the first time I found them, so much so that I've read through all your completed ones at least three times...well, with one exception. Raven and Christy's time captured in the Hellfire Club was hard to read the first time, and while otherwise I loved Raven's story, I admit to never rereading those chapters. Other than that though, I'm always thrilled to see a new chapter or story since I know it'll be a precious gift that I'll want to read again and again, so thanks in advance for anything you put out there, and especially for each new installment of the lives of these wonderful characters.