Reviews for Morning Breath
cosmicclovers chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I was giggling the whole time I read this. Lovely story :3
ClearMortality chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
I actually first read this on your Dreamwidth account, but since I'm not a member of said organization/website, I don't think I can comment on the story. Luckily, you posted it here! Yay :)

So anyway, I absolutely love this story, partly because I'm a sucker for the Horitsuba FaiYuui and partly because the story itself is hilarious. I can absolutely imagine the twins doing exactly what they did in the story xD I hope you'll write more fluff for the twins. You have quite a knack for it and I wouldn't mind reading more of what I call "food for the rabid fangirl". :)))
misere chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I avoided the image search and did a wiki search instead. I already knew it had something to do with genitals, but couldn't quite remember which part. xD

A very nice story, way to cute for the grossness described in it. Snoopy PJs and Saturday morning cartoons are good for angsty little twins and just what the doctor prescribed! (Also, I like that not both of them can sleep with their face squished into the pillow.)

You win the golden toothbrush with this! xD
lonely white cloud chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
:) lol