Reviews for Snowmen
Preposterousity chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
No no no no no don't just end it there no stop just no jack my heart oh my god why would you do that you foul creature *sobs pitifully* immaculately written, though! You captured everyone perfectly! (Although don't let that get to your head, you're still awful for what you've done to our poor hearts) I'm going to follow this story in case you intend to fix the ending (haha I mean its a good ending- it has that BAM factor- but still.)
Spere chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Wow, that's really depressing ;w; Great story though
midknightmist chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
poor jack. I do hope you let them catch up and explain. thanks for sharing
ladybug114 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
awwww that was depressing and adorable! great job!
would it be too much to ask for a sequel? because, you know, this could really use one... please? :D
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Oooh. A classic case of misunderstanding how other people would take things. Poor North did not remember to add in Jack's delicate emotional stability and years of rejection to his personal Russian "Oh, someone new showed up- they will sit down and join and be merry with us now!" I can see North as the sort who grew up in an environment such as that. Jack would be much more critical of himself and his own presence, so he of course would react in such a manner.

I hope they got this sorted out eventually, but it made for a terrific oneshot. Lonely, sad, and a bit retrospective, but very, very excellent.
Zinfandel chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
what! this is the first Guardian's fic I've read that brought tears to my eyes! what a relief to find some writing here that has depth and maturity. All of the adolescent self-serving ramblings i've been shuffling through on my Jack Frost binge had me down, but gems like these certainly keep me searching for more like it!
Lolxxx chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
D'aww that so cute!
Darke Eco Freak chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Mah feels! I swear, tears! Why must my heart go out to a supposedly fictional character?! Gah, please, please, please write a squeal or another chapter to this, Jack needs to understand!
RadicalCat chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I could see the snow guardians perfectly! I really enjoy your writing. Im half sad theres no emotional conclusion but at the same time it works to end so sharply. Hope to see lots more!
rezzkat chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Awesome! Sad and angsty, but Awesome! Who am i kidding since when have I cared if a story was sad?! if anything I like sad stories more than happy ones! Don't ask why I don't know :)
anyways, I loved this! I hope you keep writing stories because you are very good at it.
:D
NightFury812 chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
I really enjoyed reading this, I hope you continue it :)
Roselilia chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This is a beautiful story that I hope someday you will write a sequel to but even if you don't it's still a great story. It shows how the guardians regard Jack as their own by waiting for him even when he doesn't show up for the longest time as well as it shows how used Jack is to being on his own to the point that he automatically assumes that they are having a meeting without them without asking for a confirmation of some sort. It also shows how important they are to him by how he makes the snowmen in their image. The entire story shows how they aren't a perfect family quite yet since they haven't had long to make that kind of bond yet. It's beautifully written and I hope there will be other oneshots in the future.
Knowing has Risk chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Whens the next chapter its really good i really would love to read more.