|Reviews for Revenge|
| AC chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Lana. She seems to be the mysterious one...
| AC chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
Interesting. I am liking Lana.
| AC chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
In this chapter, you rushed the end.
I loved the way you flowed into a couple of Audrey's physical characteristics, without listing, though. I love it when authors just slide into a description like that, like how Katniss compared herself to Gale, instead of telling.
| AC chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I just began reading this a few seconds ago, but I think that this first chapter is a little too literal. This [girl?] says a lot of stuff like "I will do this" and "I will do that", rather than delving into her past a bit, letting us figure it out. Otherwise, well done! Nice reasoning!
| Oogie-is-the-best chapter 16 . 3/19/2013
You're going really well. Just try to upload more often. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
| charliesunshine chapter 16 . 3/6/2013
cliffhanger arrrrrrrrrrrrrrg please update this amazing story as soon as you can
| FireFrostFlare chapter 16 . 3/6/2013
Anyway, awesome chapter! :)
The whole Genie thing is kinda...freaky...She's eleven years old and she doesn't sob when she's stabbed three times? She must have some pretty big willpower...O.O But's I think it's cool that you added that in.
And good job revising!
FirefrostFlare (Your awesome editor) XP (and yeah, I did let it get to my head)
| Littlemisskigirl chapter 16 . 3/5/2013
Lol- hate u Platnum!
| Caitlinage 10 chapter 15 . 2/26/2013
love the clown idea!
post SOON this time! as always, u r AMAZING!
| Pineapple3000 chapter 15 . 2/25/2013
LOL, awesome :) Plz update soon!
| Pineapple3000 chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
oooh cool! what happens next...:P
| Pineapple3000 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
| GeneticallyPredisposedChicken chapter 15 . 2/24/2013
Interesting premise for a mutt. I like Audrey's style; bailing Astrid out when the typical Career would let her fall on her own merits. Good two chapters here.
| raysviola chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Would you like to join my hunger games roll play? I am looking for some people to help me get it started.
| Littlemisskigirl chapter 15 . 2/24/2013
Just a first, as soon as I opened this link, small letters at the top: Chapter 15: The Chasm.
Actual chapter name: The trap.
So is this glitch or...