|Reviews for One Piece: The Red Wings|
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
Hey! I remember Zane! Too bad the fanfic got cancelled!
Anyway, will you accept rivals/allies to Zane?
| Fooldartz chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
Yay! So happy to see this getting updated, can't wait to see where you end up going with this! Hope you update soon.
| PhantomShipper chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Name: Mardia Jack
Height: 7 foot 9 inches
Appearance: Wears jeans and white t-shirt, and is extremely muscular. Has brown hair cut short in a buzz cut. His right hand has been replaced with a massive metal one.
History: Jack was once the captain of the Bull Pirates, a group of rookie pirates in the South Blue. However, Jack was the only strong one of them, the others being fairly average. They were all killed before they even reached the Grand Line, and Jack went into a funk, traveling from island to island and just drinking.
Dream: To find the one who will become the Pirate King and protect them.
Weapon if any: His metal hand, which is far larger than a normal hand, (think Hellboy’s stone hand.) His fighting style is almost entirely based upon boxing to capitalize on this.
Crew Position: Councilor
Personality: Jack is a very serious person, not prone to joking, or even smiling. He’s not suicidal, but he does view himself as expendable and will fight until his opponent is no longer a threat, regardless of the damage to himself.
| ChaosCrusader chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Height: 5 feet 7 inches
Appearance: Brown hair, thin face. He wears a glass eye in his right eye (his right eye is blind owing to the fact that he works long hour near the fire with high temperature). His usual clothing is a plain white shirt and a dark brown pants. Oh ya, he wears a cloak too.
History: He once has a friend who's a great swordsman and Soileh gifted him a sword that he forged by himself but the friend died in a battle. And so he swore he'll never forge weapons again until a pirate crew (which you're gonna create) finds him.
Dream: To have a large collection of well-known sword on his room's wall
Weapon if any: He's a skilled swordsman. He uses one-handed sword and daggers.
Crew Position: Blacksmith
Personality: Soileh doesn't talk a lot, and when he does, he speaks in sarcastic manner.
| leveragehouse chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Here is my OC. I can't wait to see what you have planned, and will read even if you don't include him.
Name: Mackar Logan
Height: 6 foot 8 inches
Appearance: Logan usually wears a grey suit jacket and pants, with a purple dress shirt, sunglasses, and a white shirt.
History: When he was seventeen, Logan and his friends set out to sea with one goal-to visit each and every island in the world. Unfortunately, they were attacked by a group of pirates early on in the Grand Line, and Logan was stranded on a deserted island, the only survivor, where he lived by himself on the island for eight years, preparing for the day a ship would come by and he could complete their quest.
Dream: To visit each and every island in the world.
Power if any: Logan ate the Armor-Armor fruit, which allows him to turn anything into armor, so long as there’s enough of it to cover his entire body.
Crew Position: Scholar
Personality: As a result of his past, Logan is very serious and very quiet. He dislikes talking, but he does enjoy people’s company. He simply prefers to sit quietly and listen, just happy to be around other humans after 8 years of solitude.
| Pajama Nerd chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Name: Astra K. Lacey
Height: 5 foot 11 inches
Appearance: Wears a black armor of sorts that covers most of her body, but leaves her head uncovered, and is rather formfitting. She has very pale skin, though not quite paper white, and her eyes are a dark green.
History: Lacey was born into the royal family of Kendaria, an Empire in the North Blue that was allied with the World Government, but independent. However, a group of Marine soldiers, led by an Admiral, attacked the capital of Kendaria disguised as Pirates and killed the Emperor and his wife. Lacey, who was six at the time, hid and survived, then watched as the Kendarian Empire was absorbed without further conflict into the World Government. The Revolutionary Army exposed the treachery, and the Kendarians revolted, successfully regaining their independence after a long and bloody war. Unfortunately for Lacey, the new government of Kendaria decided that they wanted a democracy, and attempted to assassinate Lacey to prevent the royal line from continuing. Lacey, now fifteen, escaped, broke into the Royal Vault, stole the Devil Fruit it contained, and fled.
Dream: To kill the Admiral who murdered her family
Power if any: She ate the Insect-Insect fruit (Sorry if you wanted the Japanese name) model Praying Mantis, though she dislikes using it as it makes her look like an insect. The Fruit allows her to fly in hybrid and full Mantis form, and both forms also give her razor blades on her forearms that can cut through steel.
Weapon if any: She mainly uses the Royal Staff of Kendaria; a four foot pole topped with a titanium sphere, as she dislikes her Devil Fruit and only uses it when she has to.
Crew Position: Quartermaster
Personality: Lacey is rather vain, largely because she’s beautiful and she knows it. She’s not above using her beauty to manipulate men, nor is she opposed to using it on women if she knows they’re lesbians. However, she’s not lazy, and will work and fight hard if she has to. She’s not exactly obsessed with revenge, but she will get red eyed and throw caution to the wind if she ever finds herself in range of the Admiral. She has a fondness for drinking, and has a tolerance for alcohol comparable to Zoro’s.
| TealWarrior chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I would like my OC Tora to be the first mate.
Name : Tora the Tiger Hunter (or just Tora)
Appearance: Tall, lean, long wavy auburn hair, dark brown eyes, sharp looks
History : Former captain of the Tiger Claw Pirates, grew up in a small village in South Blue. (I dunno if that's enough.)
Dream: Circle the world and find One Piece
Power: Devil's Fruit, can turn into a tiger
Weapon: Two Meito katana
Crew Position: If First mate is already taken or you don't want her there, find something that fits.
Personality: Laid-back, but gets serious when needed, ambitious, smart, sharp
Other: She likes watermelon and nectarines, and is a genius at devising strategies for battle. She's a Hammer, though, so remember that.