Reviews for Sister Winter
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
I apologize if that came across as harsh. I meant it to be constructive. You are a good writer, and I hope you continue writing, even if it's just for yourself.
ahundreddoves chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
guest

Thank you for your feedback. This is actually a pretty old fic and I've been hyperaware of its flaws since the moment I posted it, only leaving it up because others seemed to enjoy it in spite of my mistakes. I'm not writing fanfic anymore, but if I do I'll try to be better at fact checking.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Nice fic. I think Katniss' reasons for leaving were a bit much. I can see her feeling like that, but not even speaking to him about it seems like a plot convenience. Also, about the TB that Prim had. I see you explained that her mom (you keep writing mum, too...that's British) didn't want to take her to the hospital. That explains why she died of something easily treatable, but there would be consequences after her death. Her mom would be arrested for neglect for not taking her to the hospital. Also, TB is extremely contagious; it is airborne. Prim would've needed to be in an isolation and Katniss would've caught it if she wasn't wearing protective gear including respiratory masks. Mistakes like that make the story less believable.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
I haven't finished this yet, but why is Prom dying? Tuberculosis is treatable and curable. She just needs to go on antibiotics for a few months.
Chalayne chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Amazing story. Heart-wrenching and amazing. Soul mate story. Also thank for introducing me to The Honey Trees. I love them!
Noctua Egestas chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
First off, great music. Second off, this story made me cry. Keep writing, please.
TheMortalAvengers chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
This is beautifully written. I love this so much
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Oh soooooo lemony
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Wow! That was amazing. It was heartbreaking and bittersweet, but what i loved the most is that it had a happy ending. Thank you for for sharing your talent with us.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
What a beautiful story. I could not stop once I started reading it. You should be so proud of this. Please keep it up.
marizpe chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
I loved the story, I dont know if you are still writting fanfictions, but you should.
Love the way Katniss and Peeta fell for each other thru the story and end up together!
insidejokepartyof1 chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Awww, I love how Rue was able to reunite Katniss and Peeta.
Affirmed chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
Absolutely the most adorable story! My sole complaint is that I started reading in the middle of the night whilst experiencing a pique of insomnia and had to stay awake to finish it. I feel like death today but I would do it again. Your Peeta is so sweet. Thank you for posting this!
donargh chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Woahhhhh! This was AMAZING!

I love the evolution of the story. Really good stuff!
innoc3nc3cuti3 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Great story line. I really enjoy the interactions between Katniss and Peeta.
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