|Reviews for Nightmares and Fables|
| Protagonist Of Life chapter 5 . 3/20/2013
Ah! She's dead!
| Protagonist Of Life chapter 3 . 3/20/2013
Wow. He's a bastard. Reminds me a lot of the phantom of the opera, you know? Eric wanted Christine, no matter the cost, he went as far as torture and murder to try to obtain her.
| PrimeEmily135 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Oooooh, this is good! I am very much interested in reading more. :) on to the next chapter! ;)
| ryodai89 chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
Oh god the feels... this was quite in your face wasn't it XI! In a good way though, trust me XD!
God... so heart-wrenching...
Once again, the detail, the use of words, STILL awed by it!
And my goodness, when these two interact I swear- I just don't know how to describe it XD!
I was totally on edge the whole time reading this! And I just kept wanting and needing more as it went on and then the END! Oh my god- oh man- I'm so utterly in love with this fic and your writing and these characters (Your OC!) and just everything TT3TT... Total fan here XD!
I can help but fangirl ALL over this when you update XD!
I also love that you paced this just SO incredibly well that so much has happened in just 3 chapters! You've given us SO much and have us readers learning ALOT about the characters in so little time! And without throwing too much out there at a time either it's just- ASDFGHJKL! You are so so so one of my fav authors on here ever X3!
Thank you again for the lovely and wonderful update X3! I ADORED it!
SO sorry this was late and so short XI! I was trying to squeeze this in last minute so... I REALLY hope you get something outta this review XD!
CAN'T can't can't wait to see what happens next! The ending- THE ENDING my god- I need more XD!
| goldden eyes chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
why does this remind me of beauty and the beast...seriously? are you trying to do that?
| goldden eyes chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
awesome. that is what it is. awesome.
| beccaxxx chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
please this is a really good chapter
I want to read more
| mittensx7768 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
cazy but in a good way.
| ryodai89 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Oh goodness thank you SO so much for this update X3!
This fic is just lovely beyond words, and gets better and better as you go on reading. I've been on edge from the second I started reading it XP. And once again I just ADORE how you write the details in this. As well as the characters.
(God I love this OC SO much X3!)
I especially liked the comment about being able to 'do more things' if you're 'good'. Because it's truly left ambiguous as to whether she's 'completely sane' and picks up on that sort of thing. Or if she lacks a little sanity and is rather smart compared to the other patients... I just picture this girl coming in more sane than she might be now, just trying to get through everything here in the best and easiest way possible but, because of the way she's treated (like the way the doctor(s) speak to her and what-not... which is just SO spot on!) she's slowly starting to become like that of some of the patients in the way she deals with things and acts... seeing and doing things in a very black and white way i.e. be good and good things will come sort of way...
I almost almost almost see it as becoming obedient like that of a pet for treats as opposed to a child wanting something in return for doing a chore and it's actually both sad and scary to think she might slowly be going towards that way...
Oh god this probably sounds so friggin' complicated DX! I swear, it made so much more sense in my head...
And god... Pitch here I swear... No words XD!
Anyways 3', thanx again for the update! I seriously can't wait to see the next one!
Especially 'cause I just NEED to know what it is she's supposed to be 'ready' for and- ohmygod I can't wait for more X3!
| aprilthirteen13 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I wanna read more! I really want to read more!
| ryodai89 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Oh... my... god.
This was, to put it simply, amazing!
FINALLY a Pitch fic I can read that's done right!
Finally finally finally an idea that's new and interesting.
A character with a personality that you simply just can't find anywhere else. Where you can just FEEL the terror she does!
A fic where Pitch is IC and yet still scary as hell (as he sould be) and not all woobie like I've been seeing XI!
And oh my god the ending here... where it isn't all like 'Okay, sure!' I mean... so tired of seeing that...
Please PLEASE update this again soon! (I don't see a 'complete' thing up so- Please tell me there'll be more TT3TT!)
I've been just so damn sick this past week in a half and today has just been hell. But this, I swear, has just totally made my night!
Best thing I've seen since I've been feeling like crap.
Thank you so much for this!
I so so so look forward to seeing more if you do decide to expand on this X3!
I most definitely hope you do!
| mittensx7768 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
| beatrice chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
hi there! ur story's idea is just great! I really couldn't get tired of stories which settings are in mental asylum/hospital/whatnot. and I have just a few suggestions to make d story better: punctuations, articles, and prepositions. the tenses were fine already, u did a really good job!
please update soon! can't wait 'till the next chappie! xD
| Decepticonloser101 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I liked it :)
Update soon please