Reviews for The Fight for a Common Cause
Nerd 3752 chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Please write more.
Sydni White chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
I like this, make more!
Fat Bitches chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
Write some more shit!
doggirl212 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
please write more.
Junior-Satanic-Moose chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
TheChickWithTheAwesomeUsername chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
This is awesome
A few minor mistakes,
Perhaps you could break the paragraphs up a bit,
But, this is great!
Little Doctor chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
PLEASE continue.
Carolyn chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
This is good! My one comment is that it seems to be moving a bit quickly; there isn't quite as much attention to detail as I like to see, but the idea is sound. I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this! Please update soon!
Hi chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
YEAH! I actually like this! Keep writing!
DrWhy chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
This is nice! Update soon!
But you should probably leave a line after each dialogue. Example-
"What are you talking about?" Ron asked. I stiffened and put my guard up. (What you wrote)
"What are you talking about?" Ron asked.
I stiffened and put my guard up.(What would be easier to read)
Good work!
Isabel chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I really like the story, but maybe you can put some funny parts here and there.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
good job so far i cant wit to read the next chapter i love this book keep up the great work PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Sara12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Keep it up come on come on ur doin great
Lexa chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Super amazing!
meadow-music chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Include Draco as a demigod!
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