Reviews for Grace
Zivarocks44 chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
I loved every word of it. Oh my... I'm crying...
Beautiful work, I just...W.O.W...
Ziva4Tony chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Wonderful story.
eva-david chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Wow! Definitely worked for me! Such a really well written story with the most perfect outcome they could have had! Sure, they fight but they find their way back together again. I loved it.
Courtzylovesit chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Perfect! This is incredible! I have to admit this is the most realistic story I have read in such a long time! So sad it's finished! I adore your writing and look forward to more in the future :)
Love it
Lipush chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Wha,,,Ass-kicking! Ok, so I'm having a hard time dealing with this heartbreaking episode. Can't BELIEVE they did that to us!*sniff*sniff* Poor Ziver. No Ima, no siblings, and no Abba now, as well:( That's just so sad, and now she's on a vengeance gig, gotta LOVE THIS! Anyway, I love your fic!
TivaGirl chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
Wow this story is amazing! I love how you showed both of their vulnerable sides :) the aunts were a great idea too! David women and their "mystical charm".. Haha :) well great job!
TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
["Ziva? Am I more important to you than your beloved knife collection?"] :'-) This was desperately needed, haha!

Wwooooo-that, that was some good fantastic writing right there. Basically just went through all the emotions myself, haha. SUCH an amazing job!
TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I've been reading some other Tiva/Shiva/Shabbat Shalom fanfics and this is definitely the first in which I've seen so much hatred for Tony towards Ziva's dad. Nice touch!

[Quick glances are exchanged, silent choices made, and then, all eyes are on Gibbs and Tony because who else would come before them—the replacement father or the partner who cares far too much?] AWHHHH, such a beautifully-worded sentence!

Usually I have a rule in which that the longer my review is, the more I loved the fanfiction. But I'm completely immersed in your tale, I just can't bring myself to interrupt the reading to write here! The bra/slip scene was done beautifully!

DEFINITELY loving Aunt Nettie!

["Ziva," he hums, and his hand moves down from the zipper and traces the outline of her hip] Oh gosh-is it hot in here or just these scenes!? D
Oh goodness, all the details and emotions, absolutely amazing! Well done!
dvd123 chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
asdfjk;! This turned me into a pile of goo. Also, your Aunt Nettie is perfect. :)

With that, I can't wait for Shiva.
Camilla chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
" ...stare down the man who was once so tall in his power but, like all others, is so small in death."
i really like this one. Yeah.
Mudprints chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Wow... that was really good. It all felt so real. Great work and thank you for sharing.
eva-david chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Loved it! Please share the second part with us when it's done! :)
jelenamichel chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
So, sometimes when people write me reviews they say that they can see something that I've written clearly happening as if they saw it in a scene in the show. I never really got that, but after reading this, I do. I can see this happening. It's heartbreaking and gorgeous and I can't wait to read more.

And welcome back to the NCIS fanfic fold. You've been missed. Please hang around for a while, because we need you.
mentalagent13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I loved it! Great piece of writing here. The story had more depth to it than most. You feel Tony's indecision in everything. Thank you so very much for writing.
RunKatRun chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Perfect timing with this story! I just finished watching the last ep. and this story is the direct continuation of what could be. Excellent!
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