Reviews for Jealous
littlesmith chapter 4 . 5/5/2013
fantastic but just one thing Donna? not possible
YouFoundMeAgainXx chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
awwwwww jsncfscndsusncvsdapvmsdv ndsfvinfvnolfv so cute and sweet and bittersweet love it :3 xxx
timelord-at-221B-fleetstreet chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
Aw this is adorable :'3 I just wish the chapters were a bit longer, but other than that it's really good :D
Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
Doctor11_Lover here, keep this coming. It's great. It's awesome. I hope something like this happens on the show.
Wall With A Fez chapter 4 . 3/23/2013
This is good if you want to continue it I think you should
cmartlover chapter 4 . 3/23/2013
Aww...I really enjoyed this chapter. It was sweet and I liked how the Doctor and River were able to be honest with each other.

That said, I have a question. Is River post-Library in this fic? Because based on her reactions in SITL/FOTD, I think that while she'd already met 10, the Library is the only place she'd encountered Donna.
Anon chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
I love it! I love it! I love it!
We need a confortation like that.
I thought Clara was going to be a interesting compainion but not as one with a romantic interest in the Doctor. And the kiss! Did you forget you are married, dear Doctor? Not mentioning it or anything.
The ending was very poignant, I've just a few hours ago rewatched TATM, and the ending of chapter three, the fact River knows she can never be the compainion he needs even when he offered. Great work, I look forward to more chapters.
Corr5092 chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
i enjoyed it
Readwriteedit chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
I love this story! I was rather annoyed at the Christmas special, and I like to read stories that resolve it. :-) Please update really, really, soon!
Kerjen chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
"This meant that not only had he not told her he was married, he hadn't told her she existed."

Yeah, what about that, Doctor?!

And I wish Moffat would have them hug! Yeesh, he hugs everybody but his wife!
charmedtomeetyou chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
Haha this is so much fun to read! Awesome :)
simbagirl chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
Oh, hope you update soon!
1ttrobinson chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
I really love it. Thank you
SonicTeamFreeWill chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
"You could say a lot of things about The Doctor. You could not call him tactful." No that you could not. Loving it so far though...can't wait for her meeting with Oswin!
Shaydees chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
Yeah! River vs. Oswin. I can't decide if I like Oswin or not. As a companion, she looked like she would be fabulous, but I really don't like her as a love interest. I hope they don't go there. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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