What the fuck just happened to the grammar and spelling? First chapter was okay, but I feel like I just had a stroke reading that.

WHAT THE FRICKIN HOT FUDGE SUNDAE WITH RAINBOW SPRINKLES AND A CHERRY ON TOP WAS THAT?!

Very interesting concept sending Percy back in time as the Son of Chaos.
Is he a little very overpowered? Yes.
Do I care? No haha

Thanks for sharing

Lol Chaos doesn't need to follow the ancient laws he's above them. And he definitely doesn't need permission from the fates

Please continue this story it is amazing and I am dieing to see what happens next

Please continue this story it is probley the most intriguing fanfiction I have ever read. Also I give this story six out of five stars

Love it!

it was...weird

HAHA,I WOULD LOVE TO SEE KRONOS PEE HIS PANTS, at least Gaea has common sense

again like when he was in train, we were let known that percy is going to remove ARES from existence. .does that not seem like a SPOILER? imagine how amusing it could have been had we(readers) had found out about it right as he wiped the god of war. so consider not writing about what is going to happen in future , rather tell that when it is happening .( for instance you could have not at all mentioned what percy was going to do to ares and when he killed him, you could have written it something like...the god of war was wiped from existence. like after percy actually kiiled him)
hope you understood what i was trying to convey and take it positively :)

I like how you twisted things. but instead of telling beforehand what the twist is (like Percy planning to lift the curse was mentioned before he actually lifted the curse), it would be better if there was a bit of a suspense (like we would not know beforehand that Percy is going to lift off the curse and inly know it when he actually does so). also it would be appreciated if you would not use abusive words(18) . although I like the change in character in Percy, if you it from a different perspective , he kind of seems like a jerk on first impressions (like pushing around, walking on someone, a lot of smirks. I think you get the Idea) I kinda liked the old personality of Percy ,but of course that's just a suggestion.

In the series theres an elevator

Argus not agnus

Lovely

Awesome book so far I really like it I always thought the gods were mean so I can see why Percy is mad unlike some other fabrics I've read. Also I notice there are typoes but it doesn't bother me