|Reviews for Son of Chaos Book One
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 7 . 2/16/2021
With him saying "bloody" and "bugger" I swear he's Australian
| Aion-Maxtori chapter 12 . 12/16/2020
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/11/2020
It would be nice to see Percy become friends with Mark so that he gets some better characteristics.
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/11/2020
I don't mind it being different from the book because that's kind of the point of fanfiction.
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/10/2020
Interesting new development
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2020
It was nice seeing Percy being forgiving in this chapter.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/17/2020
MAN that Aphrodite killing part was amazing *aagh i am all pink *
| someonefamous99 chapter 12 . 10/31/2020
anyone else kinda disappointed about how the power level between Chaos and the fates are too weird - Chaos shouldn't have to do anything that the fates decree due to them only having control of mortal strings and a control to direct the flow of fate not even the ability to control the olympians let alone the most powerful being in the universe - Chaos, he should be handicapping them not the other way around, he made the ancient laws for Christs sake
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2020
Chaos: now umm kill him
Percy: I can't it's not right...
Chaos: DO IT
Percy: cuts off hera's head
| is unavailable chapter 12 . 7/5/2020
whats book two called
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2020
So Percy will be a 100000000 times better Grover
| griff chapter 12 . 6/19/2020
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2020
This one is exactly the same as the one on quotev, are you the same author?
| Infernius chapter 1 . 6/2/2020
Ok, ok, ok... stop. I think someone need to point this but...where in the fucking universe does CHAOS make a DEAL. And where CHAOS is AS STRONG as all the Olympus GOD. I can take lots of BS hut you can't make me swallow a cactus. Chaos IS THE FUCKING PRIMORDIAL a fart from him is enough to make a new galaxy, so here is my question : in what goddamn univere can't Chaos say "fuck you the Fate" ? Creation is his fucking playground. I need logic to be interested and right in the begin you throw it out the window.
Chaos is LITTERALY the only true being that can DO WHATEVER it want and the Fate sister's and Ananke herself will have to suck it up.
I was about to read all the book but unless you can grab back my interest I don't think I'll go beyond chap 1 of the first book.
I pray for you to continu in your writing and not be disciurage by people like me who critique when they're not happy :).
| siqifan69 chapter 6 . 5/26/2020
Rucksack is german. Backpack is English