Reviews for The Heart of Christmas
Fribouille chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
It's so sweet, I loved it :)
I love seeing Harry in a domestic situation, it suits him I think. And Severus fits in so well ; Reluctant but willing to make an effort for Harry's sake 3

I don't know about you but Albus is my favorite of the Potters children, he is so lovable (even in JKR's epilogue, which I hated!). I feel like hugging him all the time D

"Wow! And what's that bit?" he asked, using his spatula to point to a random splodge of blue with what looked like a deformed house-elf beside it.
"Albus in the pond," Lily replied simply." LOL, that was my favorite line!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Not a bad short story and for it I give you: Five Bronze Stars.

Hope to see more one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.
The Lazy Princess chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Christmas Cheer ... unique story ... liked the way Severus interacted with Harry's kids , I always thought that Severus and Harry would make good couple if there had been less of hatred ...
Lady DestinyHope chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Aww! This is very cute and I enjoyed how you portrayed the characters!
HalfbloodAuditore chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Beautiful.
BelovedShadow chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Wow! This is really sweet and really well done! The children's antics were amusing and warm, and the end was so loving and perfect. I really love that you have each child their own personality and attributes without making the story focus on the kids instead of Snape and Harry.

Thanks so much for writing this, I truly enjoyed it!
AlmondWithUnicornHair chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Lovely!