|Reviews for Objection!|
| Hikari R chapter 40 . 11/21/2013
A magnificent piece of work indeed! I'm definitely reading the sequel! Idc if I have 79 to catch up on. I'm reading it for sure.
| Hikari R chapter 11 . 11/20/2013
Witness: After the defendant picked up the victim, I followed him for a while, until I got to a waterfall. I couldn't find him and the only other thing I saw was a cave, but he couldn't have gotten there, so I went back.
Me: OBJECTION! The witness couldn't have followed him bc there was only Pearl's footprints on the ground (according to how I'm understanding the story)!
| HomicidalSally chapter 40 . 7/18/2013
Very well written story! I thought I was actually playing part of the game! There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but that's a given in writing. Even my stories have slip ups! Anyway, I would give this a nine out of ten if I had to rate it. I guess this story is popular for a reason!
Keep up the good work!
| AA Addict chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
This story rocked the house down! I loved the suspense! I was reading this in bed, it was 1:00am and I couldn't put it down! But let me get this straight: Maya was engaged to Jonathan, then she kissed Apollo, and THEN she's dating Lloyd?! Poor Phoenix! His heart must be like /3! I'm trying to find the continuous objection, but to no avail! On fanfiction, I've read only two other stories which are as good as this. Rest of the pieces and Pearl saves the future. And I've read a lot of fanfiction! ;-) Sorry for blurting out random stuff in my review! I'll end this review by giving it 10/10!
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
"I hope she doesn't hat me for this". Hahahahaha! I can just imagen her putting a hat on Pheonix!
| sonicboy678 chapter 25 . 4/13/2013
As soon as he mentioned the croissant had a liquid filling, I got concerned and suspected that the filling was berry-based. The reaction (anaphylaxis) and the description of the exact filling only confirmed my fear.
| Sixteen Vanilla Beans chapter 40 . 2/23/2013
Aw, the story is over! -Sob!- I really liked this story! The only things I didn't like was the Apollo/Maya thing and Eldoon's death. I can't wait to start reading the sequel!
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/23/2013
Your story has such an amazing quality that you should publish it, honestly. Also, why didn't Phoenix confess his love? After all, this is a love story, right...?
| Cristoph474 chapter 40 . 2/22/2013
It's not my habit, but now it's stronger than me. Time for my "review of the whole story". So, plot: surprisingly good. I could not stop myself from reading each chapter. Next, the characters. Every person what was created for this fanfic in my book is better than the Capcom characters. I was kinda disappointed about mr. Eldoon's death, but the story compensated it. To be honest, the only thing what wasn't good in my opinion is his death. So my final verdict for this story is: 9.9 out of 10 It's a MUST READ!
| Psychochiken chapter 40 . 2/22/2013
Awesome! Way to kick ass! Loved it all the way! Can't wait for the sequel!
| Cristoph474 chapter 39 . 2/21/2013
Suspense is killing me. There comes GRANDE FINALE. Cannot wait. I will miss the story also, but there will be a sequel, so "King Died, Long Live The King"
| Psychochiken chapter 39 . 2/20/2013
Holy crap! Time for the pursuit music! Let's end this turkey!
| Psychochiken chapter 38 . 2/19/2013
Talk about courtroom drama! This is just what would happen in the the actual game! Good job!
| Cristoph474 chapter 38 . 2/19/2013
It's sad that this story comes to an inevitable end so quickly. I cannot think of any other stories equally good as the "Objection". It is impossible.
| Cristoph474 chapter 37 . 2/18/2013
The Grande Finale is getting closer and closer. To be honest, I will miss this story. I have spend many hours reading it, and I cannot call it a waste of time.